Passions Gallery--Elizabeth Cor (creator and creation)

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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-12-14 01:24 PM

from the beginning, she only wanted one thing
to belong
no just to someone else
     but to herself
to her own mind, her own body, her own soul
the spirit called to her, filling her very being
and she not only welcomed it,
          she embraced it
                    so much so, that she became transfigured
in a burst of inspiration, she came into being again
not only newly born,
     but newly created
a being of pure creative energy
          waiting to be molded and shaped
                    by the artist of life
who would make her in a new image
and in that new image, she would find peace
     the peace of creation
          the peace of art
               her peace
she became not only creation, but creator
          spinning the tales of her life from her heart
          onto the page like bolts of lightning
and the flashes became one, became a light pure and true
     and in that light, we beheld her as she is
                                                  as she was
                                                  as she ever will be

the knower of life
keeper of tears
creator of light
poet of the heart

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-12-14 01:40 PM

From her very first post, I was completely blown away...she is truly a remarkable talent!!! Thank you Sven...for saying it for us.

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

2 posted 2000-12-14 02:00 PM

Sven,
   This is a work of art!! Such imagery you used in the creation of this masterpiece.  Can't wait to read more...
      Much love,
         Elise

Elizabeth Cor
Senior Member

since 2000-10-13

Posts 879
Over the river and through the woods

3 posted 2000-12-14 04:51 PM

Sven, I'm at a loss for words...

~ Beth

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2000-12-14 04:59 PM

*sigh* oh Sven the beauty of this wonderful poem blesses the lady she is. How wonderfully you have shown us her heart. Much love to you from me. I loved it, sweet man.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2000-12-14 09:01 PM

Now Sven look what you did...now give Elizabeth her words back so she can entrance us once more...hurry up now...{~,^}

fine piece, Sven...lovely...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2000-12-15 08:26 AM

My lack of apperance due to illness on passions has kept me from seeing a great deal of these, but I'm astounded as to how well you've captured the poets themselves in your words

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2000-12-15 08:35 AM

you did it again, wonderful tribute for an amazing poet....and now she lost her words....hope she will find them back soon....

wonderful penned my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

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