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Open Poetry #11
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0 posted 2000-12-14 10:30 AM


Heaven spews forth gift

Glories stream, curtain's asunder

Our home is secured

© December 13, 2000
© Copyright 2000 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-12-14 10:39 AM

Oh WOW. Your words had me seeing home as a haven from the storms outside. Wonderful. I loved this. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com
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2 posted 2000-12-14 11:01 AM

YES!! Love this , this is exactly my morning!   -SEA

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3 posted 2000-12-14 07:56 PM

Glad you enjoyed, but I guess I should have capitalized Gift as I was meaning the gift that 1st Christmas and then the 2nd gift, the curtain/veil rent asunder.
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