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When I Dream 5
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When I Dream 5 |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
When I Dream # 5 ( The end ) By Richard Maxfield 6-13-2000 Close my eyes To sleep I see your Soft brown eyes Sexy full lips Suggesting sensuality Make it my reality Long lean body My arms ache to hold I want to be your lover Cherish heart and soul To kiss you Feel you As our nights unfold You know me Like no other Let heaven Be our goal As two We shall take a journey To a place Few have seen There will be no hurry When it’s only You and me We meet Each night Loving touching tasting Burning with desire Consumed By new passion Going ever higher In afterglow Our bodies Trembling Spent I now know the meaning of true content You are my fire My one true addiction There is Only but one Problem Your not real Your fiction For I only see you WHEN I DREAM |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
fiction or not..i like..  alot..~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
One day when I meet the Lady of my dreams it will no longer be fiction. ~~~~Big sigh~~~~ But i will contune to hang on to dreams until I meet her. Thank you for your comments. Love and light, Richard |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I hope this will come true for you soon!! Beautiful -SEA |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Aw, yes Richard..Some day it will happen when you least expect it ..Don't ever let go of the DREAM.... ~LL~I liked this one much... The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
I hope you realize your dreams soon, Richard. The set of poems were so woell expressed passion from pen and as always excellent and enjoyable to your readers. iI can sure relate to the fictional aspect of which you refer. Take care and keep the faith! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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