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maxtec1
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0 posted 2000-12-14 04:13 PM



When I Dream # 5 ( The end )
By Richard Maxfield
6-13-2000

Close my eyes
To sleep
I see your
Soft brown eyes
Sexy full lips
Suggesting sensuality
Make it my reality

Long lean body
My arms ache to hold
I want to be your lover
Cherish heart and soul

To kiss you
Feel you
As our nights unfold
You know me
Like no other
Let heaven
Be our goal

As two
We shall take a journey
To a place
Few have seen
There will be no hurry
When it’s only
You and me

We meet
Each night
Loving touching tasting
Burning with desire
Consumed
By new passion
Going ever higher

In afterglow
Our bodies
Trembling
Spent
I now know the meaning
of true content

You are my fire
My one true addiction
There is
Only but one Problem
Your not real
Your fiction

For I only see you
WHEN I DREAM

© Copyright 2000 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 2000-12-14 04:24 PM


fiction or not..i like.. alot..

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


maxtec1
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2 posted 2000-12-14 04:37 PM


One day when I meet the Lady of my dreams it will no longer be fiction. ~~~~Big sigh~~~~ But i will contune to hang on to dreams until I meet her.
Thank you for your comments.

Love and light,
Richard

SEA
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3 posted 2000-12-14 05:40 PM


I hope this will come true for you soon!!   Beautiful   -SEA
Lady Lightning
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4 posted 2000-12-14 08:15 PM


Aw, yes Richard..Some day it will happen when you least expect it ..Don't ever let go of the DREAM....    ~LL~
I liked this one much...


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
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5 posted 2000-12-14 09:14 PM


I hope you realize your dreams soon, Richard. The set of poems were so woell expressed passion from pen and as always excellent and enjoyable to your readers.
iI can sure relate to the fictional aspect of which you refer. Take care and keep the faith!


Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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