Open Poetry #11 |
Janet Marie (acrostic) |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Joyful angel wing hugs And butterfly kisses Noticing every heart around you Extending love to all Then there's that 3 am reminder.......... Mysterious as ever, that Ache we've come to know so well Raining upon your heart......... I feel every word you write, our Exquisite.......beautiful.....Butterfly Slippers ~SEA~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how very lovely. I loved this poem. 'I feel every word you write' oh yes, I feel this about many of the fantastic poets here. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
BIG SMILES and many hugs for a couple of my very favorite girlies!!!! These are great, Sea...and I can tell that you know the Passions Poets very well! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, this is Creative as only Circe can be Inandescent sparkles for the eye to see Richly deserving of delighted praise Entrancing us all, our glasses we raise ' See the smile of us one and all A tribute from Cire we hear her call Come and read her words of loves' smiles Rumours of these wonders spread for miles Outstanding is the writing of our friend Seemingly her inspiration knows no end Toil she does on these jewels so fine Impossible but still she finds the time Circe we all truly thank you And all the other poets here are calling out yes and me too. This is utterly truly beautiful. You are so amazing with these acrostics that you write. Wonderful love really wonderful. Take care Mushy Love to you from me, have a fabulous Christmas Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sea~ wonderful poem about an amazing and beautiful poet/person. great job!! ~amy~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*smiling and humbly blushing*... ya know ... you got me with this one Sea-girlie ... and yes...you know the poets (me) well as Sen said ... ya had me with the butterfly kisses line and ya put me over the top with the 3 am ache and the butterfly slippers ... as well as the "feeling every word" line .. THANK YOU VERY MUCH for this sweet gift and honor Susan ... I am sincerely touched by this ...more than you know. I once had a poetry workshop teacher tell me that "I give too much of me away" in my poetry ... since coming here...I learned that is not a "bad" thing nor any thing I intend to change. thank you again for this and all your replies that are part of the reason I learned this lesson. later-sweet-queen-of-acrostic-gator jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Startime~thank you very much, she is a gem! Serenity~ I love you guys Marsha~ you, my dear friend are too sweet! Amy~ thank you Janet~ I just tried to eek out some of the feelings......I think you are amazing.....you are very special and I hope that you never stop showing us your heart, you never could give us too much of you....that is what we love!! I am so very happy you liked this Hugs to you -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a beautiful tribute to a beautiful lady |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You keep giving of yourself Janet Marie...it's quite becoming on you! SEA! I am SO impressed! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
A beautiful poem - from one beautiful lady to another - This place abounds in talent |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
THIS is what makes you the special poet that you are. This is definitely HER to the "raspberry" tea(e). Wonderful job of capturing her essence my sweet friend. Now you did forget her other middle name. Stubborn Crazy Radical Obstinant Obsessive Gyrating (don't ask)LOL Eccentric BUT I LOVE HER TO DEATH. She is so much a part of my life that I would not know which end is up if I didn't have her friendship. Besides, I have to have someone to share the blame with for this poetry addiction don't I?< !signature--> A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 12-14-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, One of my favorite topics, well done. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Found my library card......whew.....that was close.LOL A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
A new color just for Janet Marie!!!!!! Sea this is so wonderful of you to be writing such beautiful poems for the other poets here and from what I know of her from reading, you have done a wonderful job. I know that she is loved by many here because I see it everyday that I come in here. Her replies are so full of heart. Loved it. ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Janets last poem brought me a tear, this one certainly brought me a smile. Wonderful! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SEA, I applaud you on this JM acrostic... I loved every word... Hugs2Usweetie coco |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA--I love this. Very nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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