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SEA
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0 posted 2000-12-14 10:29 AM



Joyful angel wing hugs
And butterfly kisses
Noticing every heart around you
Extending love to all
Then there's that 3 am reminder..........

Mysterious as ever, that
Ache we've come to know so well
Raining upon your heart.........
I feel every word you write, our
Exquisite.......beautiful.....Butterfly Slippers

~SEA~

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Startime
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1 posted 2000-12-14 10:32 AM


*sigh* how very lovely. I loved this poem.
'I feel every word you write'
oh yes, I feel this about many of the fantastic poets here. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


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2 posted 2000-12-14 10:36 AM


BIG SMILES and many hugs for a couple of my very favorite girlies!!!! These are great, Sea...and I can tell that you know the Passions Poets very well!
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3 posted 2000-12-14 10:50 AM


Circe, this is

Creative as only Circe can be
Inandescent sparkles for the eye to see
Richly deserving of delighted praise
Entrancing us all, our glasses we raise
'
See the smile of us one and all

A tribute from Cire we hear her call
Come and read her words of loves' smiles
Rumours of these wonders spread for miles
Outstanding is the writing of our friend
Seemingly her inspiration knows no end
Toil she does on these jewels so fine
Impossible but still she finds the time
Circe we all truly thank you

And all the other poets here are calling out yes and me too.
This is utterly truly beautiful. You are so amazing with these acrostics that you write. Wonderful love really wonderful.
Take care
              Mushy
                
Love to you from me, have a fabulous Christmas
                
              


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


Aimster
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4 posted 2000-12-14 10:50 AM


sea~
wonderful poem about an amazing and
beautiful poet/person. great job!!

~amy~

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2000-12-14 11:05 AM


*smiling and humbly blushing*...
ya know ... you got me with this one Sea-girlie ...
and yes...you know the poets (me) well as Sen said ...
ya had me with the butterfly kisses line and
ya put me over the top with the 3 am ache and the butterfly slippers ...
as well as the "feeling every word" line ..
THANK YOU VERY MUCH for this sweet gift and honor Susan ...
I am sincerely touched by this ...more than you know.

I once had a poetry workshop teacher tell me that "I give too much of me away" in my poetry ...
since coming here...I learned that is not a "bad" thing nor any thing I intend to change.
thank you again for this and all your replies that are part of the reason I learned this lesson.
later-sweet-queen-of-acrostic-gator
jm


Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

SEA
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6 posted 2000-12-14 11:14 AM


Startime~thank you very much, she is a gem!  

Serenity~ I love you guys  

Marsha~ you, my dear friend are too sweet!  

Amy~ thank you  

Janet~ I just tried to eek out some of the feelings......I think you are amazing.....you are very special and I hope that you never stop showing us your heart, you never could give us too much of you....that is what we love!! I am so very happy you liked this   Hugs to you  

-SEA

Paula Finn
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missouri
7 posted 2000-12-14 11:28 AM


What a beautiful tribute to a beautiful lady
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2000-12-14 12:19 PM


You keep giving of yourself Janet Marie...it's quite becoming on you!

SEA!  I am SO impressed!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Wilfred Yeats
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9 posted 2000-12-14 12:21 PM


A beautiful poem - from one beautiful lady to another - This place abounds in talent
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
10 posted 2000-12-14 02:39 PM


THIS is what makes you the special poet that you are.  This is definitely HER to the "raspberry" tea(e).  Wonderful job of capturing her essence my sweet friend.  Now you did forget her other middle name.

Stubborn
Crazy
Radical
Obstinant
Obsessive
Gyrating (don't ask)LOL  
Eccentric

BUT I LOVE HER TO DEATH.  She is so much a part of my life that I would not know which end is up if I didn't have her friendship. Besides, I have to have someone to share the blame with for this poetry addiction don't I?< !signature-->

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 12-14-2000).]

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2000-12-14 03:03 PM


Sea,
One of my favorite topics, well done.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
12 posted 2000-12-14 03:55 PM


Found my library card......whew.....that was close.LOL

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Lady Lightning
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13 posted 2000-12-14 09:24 PM


A new color just for Janet Marie!!!!!!   Sea this is so wonderful of you to be writing such beautiful poems for the other poets here and from what I know of her from reading, you have done a wonderful job.  I know that she is loved by many here because I see it everyday that I come in here.  Her replies are so full of heart.  Loved it. ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
14 posted 2000-12-15 06:27 AM


Janets last poem brought me a tear, this one certainly brought me a smile. Wonderful!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


CocoBaci
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15 posted 2000-12-18 12:44 PM



SEA, I applaud you on this JM acrostic...
I loved every word...

Hugs2Usweetie
coco
  

Poeminister
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16 posted 2000-12-18 12:47 PM


SEA--I love this.  Very nicely done.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


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