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Verve
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore

0 posted 2000-12-14 02:07 AM




Where are you now?
Are you happy?
Are you carefree?
Are you where you want to be?
Can you see me now?
Can you hear me still?
Can you feel my weeping sighs?

I can still see you.
I can still hear you near.
I can still feel your wondrous smiles,
Soothing my tears.
I do not know if you are happy.
I do not know if you are carefree.
But I do know, you're where you should be.
In my loving haven of beautiful memories,
Where you shall always be.

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This was written for a friend whose ex girlfriend passed away. Just wanna share this with everyone here ... ...
~Verve


© Copyright 2000 Regina Ng C. L. - All Rights Reserved
CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

1 posted 2000-12-14 02:13 AM


But I do know, you're where you should be.
In my loving haven of beautiful memories,
Where you shall always be.
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VERVE, this poem is touching and the above quote just brings tears to eyes....

A lovely write PoetFriend thank you for sharing...

coco


Lady Lightning
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 422
Kentucky
2 posted 2000-12-14 03:02 AM


How sad your reason for writing this, but how beautifully you did it... ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Verve
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
3 posted 2000-12-14 11:43 AM



Hi CoCo,
You are most welcomed. Itz nice to know that it was appreciated.

Hi LL,
I too wish the motivation behind this poem didn't have to be so sad... and i am glad u thought well of it.

Thanks for dropping in, everyone.

~verve

vandana
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since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
4 posted 2000-12-14 11:48 AM


Nicely done!!!!
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