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Resigned [with a smile..........................................]
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Resigned [with a smile..........................................] |
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Sunshine
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Resigned She tried oh she tried so much so she finally cried “enough, enough” and turned it off, but the music continued on in her soul and lifted her, made her sing and carry a tune (she could not sing) but she had not forgot the words he spoke and she choked and coughed “turn it off, turn it off” and still the music continued on in her soul and like a top ten tune perhaps it would be her destiny and ruin (by design) and she would be in like resigned to think of the day when the music wouldn’t stop. Resignation ruled and while she was no one’s fool she knew the ins and outs and could not act ice cool heaven forbid she shook to the tune of a ringing phone and the radio’s jazzy saxophone let alone the Golden Oldies Pina Coladas everything reminded her of why she was so unsure and how she never acted this way from day to day to day today Resigned. Resighed. Realigned. By design. < !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-12-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 WOW!! Lovin this ........."Resignation ruled and while she was no one’s fool she knew the ins and outs and could not act ice cool" ohh yes, this hits the heart for me......  -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is so goood Oh how I love this one utterly you and wonderful. Cheering madly, and waving my little flag, Oooops I'm getting over exuberant again  (But you know what I'm like love, )Love it LOVE IT Take care Majestic Marsha (Although I bet you don't call me that after you've seen my little pressie )Patience dear heart, it's coming to a blue page near you Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very Nice Sunshine enjoyed this very much. Rich |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA, somehow I knew you might...thank you for being here, especially today... Marsha, by the time I got around to answer this, I've read your "pressie" and loved it...I'm still trying to figure out why I'm Persephone...and I've had a wonderful day, bless you... Thank you Rich, for looking in.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
This is absolutely wonderful! I really enjoyed reading it. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
always. . . wonderful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, this is MUCH deeper than an initial reading would suggest. Think I'll read it again...... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
BWA...thank you for coming in to read... Sven...yes you are...thank you... 'Deer, if you get this one figured out, tell me...I'm still trying to figure out why Marsha thinks I'm akin to Persephone...and now I'm studying Greek mythology to figure it out...and hey...thanks for coming in to read... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
because I like the self exposing poetry she writes - I read Doreen - because I love the wonderful insights - I read yours - now I know I can go to you for both |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wilfred, thank you...I read doreen not once, not twice, but over and over...she gives so much inspiration and not once but a multitude of times have I been tunneled through a whirlwind of her words and end up finding mine... Thank you. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunshine...wow...this is just so deep...like 'deer I need to read it again |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunshine...wow...this is just so deep...like 'deer I need to read it again |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Paula...I thank you times two! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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