navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #11 » Heal Me
Open Poetry #11
Post A Reply Post New Topic Heal Me Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
John R
Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141
Toledo OH

0 posted 2000-12-18 07:36 PM



Heal Me

I will hide my fears,
put on my mask and pretend;
while the pain in my heart
cuts deeper every day.
I can close my wounds
and hide my scars, but only
you can heal me.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John


© Copyright 2000 John Romstadt - All Rights Reserved
SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
1 posted 2000-12-18 07:51 PM


this is heart warming........very sweet write!   -SEA
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-12-18 07:55 PM


John,
I offer you nothing but heartfelt HuGS. *HuGS*
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Tiersdin
Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
3 posted 2000-12-18 08:10 PM



I know these feelings all too well...

excellent write..

-Tier

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2000-12-18 08:12 PM


John...
I "felt" what you wrote. excellent poem...
you conveyed your feelings so well that
you leave the reader "feeling" them too.
very sad write but also very beautiful.

take care
~amy~

~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~


John R
Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141
Toledo OH
5 posted 2000-12-19 12:11 PM


Sea~My heart needs warming it is too lonely

Kethry~ your hugs are much appreciated.

Tiersdin~It is all so true the pain in my heart can only be healed by the one I love.

Aimster!always my aim Thanks

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John


brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
6 posted 2000-12-19 02:49 PM


I am glad that you have someone who can heal those scars for you. Love can work wonders,
loved the poem.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Victoria
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

7 posted 2000-12-19 03:38 PM


nicely written john...i can relate  

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



maxtec1
Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
8 posted 2000-12-19 03:51 PM


bravo i really liked it. It was short yet said lots. Good job.
love and light,
Richard

Corinne
Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
9 posted 2000-12-19 04:00 PM


Poignant, JohnR.

Best to you,


Corinne

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #11 » Heal Me

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary