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| Open Poetry #11 |
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Heal Me |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH 
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Heal Me I will hide my fears, put on my mask and pretend; while the pain in my heart cuts deeper every day. I can close my wounds and hide my scars, but only you can heal me. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is heart warming........very sweet write!  -SEA |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
John, I offer you nothing but heartfelt HuGS. *HuGS* Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I know these feelings all too well... excellent write.. -Tier |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
John... I "felt" what you wrote. excellent poem... you conveyed your feelings so well that you leave the reader "feeling" them too. very sad write but also very beautiful. take care ~amy~ ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Sea~My heart needs warming it is too lonely Kethry~ your hugs are much appreciated. Tiersdin~It is all so true the pain in my heart can only be healed by the one I love. Aimster!always my aim Thanks If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I am glad that you have someone who can heal those scars for you. Love can work wonders, loved the poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written john...i can relate ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
bravo i really liked it. It was short yet said lots. Good job. love and light, Richard |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Poignant, JohnR. Best to you, Corinne |
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