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Take Me Back (800th Post):)
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Take Me Back (800th Post):) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Take me back In time, I will find myself standing all alone In the rain, Looking back At the memories, I had before, In life, I know, It is true, You won't be coming back to me, So I take myself to take a look At the memories I have shared with you, I will take myself T yesterday, Won't you say anything about, What has gone already? Knowing that you are gone away, And It is too much, knowing you are not there With me, So I take myself In time, back In rain, Laughing eyes, Knowing Why It took me that long To show you How much I love you, So I take myself To yesterday, Those days of memories, I take myself Back In time, Take back me to yesterday, |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderful poem Vandana. One of your best. I liked it a lot. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
vandana~ beautiful poem! full of a very loving heart and your poetic grace. take care. ~amy~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done and congratulations on your 800th ..HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Vandana this must have been someone really special that awakened many feelings and desires within your heart..James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you all!!!!!  Mike,Yes, I liked this poem too.I just worte recently. |
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Rindercella Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64La La Land |
An easy poem to read and I think it is well written because it is from your heart. That is a lot of writing, so congratulations. *If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you for your replies!!!!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful penned my friend, love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you,Chramisa!!!This is one of my fovrite too. liked this myself |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You should like it my friend. You have really shown the purpose for those special memories that we are blessed to be able to call on when we desire to or need to. Congrats on your 800th....looks like that 1000 is just around the corner. Get your party hat ready. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I felt this like a very sharp pain in my heart. I keep trying to go back, and it seems to be impossible, damn it! Awesome poem. Sandra Dream as if you'll live forever; Live as if you'll die today. — James Dean |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you,Mark Yes,1000 th post is just around.I'm exicted!!!!! Thank you,catalmoon |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderfully penned, my friend...your heart shows. jwesley |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Jwesley,thank you a lot |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh vandana, do we really want to go back?? *sigh*. . . sometimes, I think that we do. . . congrats on the 800th my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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