Open Poetry #11 |
a letter for love |
Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
~A letter for Love~ do you close your eyes when you kiss me? when i'm sleeping will you hold my hand? when i fall into your arms, will you be the strongest man. will you keep the words unspoken can you fix me when i'm broken this i need to know. will you stand tall and above all will you love me? Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I hope he answered back with a YES, if so then his love is true. lovely poem. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
What a wonderful write, and a pleasure to read, my friend!!! I shall look for more from you......thoroughly enjoyed this!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
If my sweetheart asked me these things, I'd answer 'Yes' to them all. I liked this one very much. Nice to hear from you. Sing while you may -The Prophet Qa'sepel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Qa'sepel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A letter that I enjoyed reading very much...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great letter! and I agree with Brian I hope he answered back YES! nicely done! |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
well thank you all for your replies...and well...he did say yes nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
very good writing. I enjoyed the read. Love and light, Richard |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful!! this is an excellent poem. . . I'm sure that we've all penned letters like this. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Did I tell you how much I love this! I love it. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Did I tell you how much I love this! I love it. Well gee didn't mean to say it twice! sorry about that!!< !signature--> "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 01-02-2001).] |
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