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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2001-01-02 01:52 PM


~A letter for Love~

do you close your eyes when you kiss me?
when i'm sleeping will you hold my hand?
when i fall into your arms,
will you be the strongest man.
will you keep the words unspoken
can you fix me when i'm broken
this i need to know.
will you stand tall
and above all
will you love me?

Nikolette Sadness


i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

© Copyright 2001 Nicole Crisp - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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1 posted 2001-01-02 01:56 PM


I hope he answered back with a YES, if so then his love is true. lovely poem.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Sunnyone
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2 posted 2001-01-02 01:58 PM


What a wonderful write, and a pleasure to read, my friend!!!  I shall look for more from you......thoroughly enjoyed this!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@


Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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3 posted 2001-01-02 02:10 PM


If my sweetheart asked me these things, I'd answer 'Yes' to them all.
I liked this one very much. Nice to hear from you.


Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-01-02 02:38 PM


A letter that I enjoyed reading very much...James
ethome
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5 posted 2001-01-02 02:40 PM


Great letter! and I agree with Brian I hope he answered back YES! nicely done!
Nikolette Sadness
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6 posted 2001-01-02 06:04 PM


well thank you all for your replies...and well...he did say yes



nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

maxtec1
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7 posted 2001-01-02 06:11 PM


very good writing. I enjoyed the read.
Love and light,
Richard

Sven
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8 posted 2001-01-02 07:19 PM


wonderful!!

this is an excellent poem. . . I'm sure that we've all penned letters like this. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Irish Rose
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9 posted 2001-01-02 07:22 PM


Did I tell you how much I love this! I love it.

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen


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10 posted 2001-01-02 07:23 PM


Did I tell you how much I love this! I love it.  Well gee didn't mean to say it twice!  sorry about that!!< !signature-->

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

   Kathleen



[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 01-02-2001).]

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