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Balladeer
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0 posted 2000-12-11 04:27 PM


I have to say I Love You
'Cause the words pour out of me.
I couldn't stop them if I tried..
I Love You, don't ya see?

I Love You for the way you are
And what you make of me
So, when my mouth clicks in, it says
I Love You! Golly Gee!!!!!

It's just because I Love You
That it goes in all my rhymes
And I'm sure I could say I Love You
Seven hundred times!!

I'm feeling like a schoolboy!
I just Love You tirelesly.
Your heart is in my treasure chest..
I Love You is the key!

It's like some wild addiction
For which I have no cure!
But there's one thing it lets me know -
I Love You! - That's for sure!!!!

Don't mean to act like such a pest
The way that some guys do
But I'll tell you a little secret...
Sweetheart - I LOVE YOU!!!!!!
© Copyright 2000 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-12-11 04:32 PM

My friend, I am sure that LJA will love it!!!!!!!!!    Seriously kind sir, this was wonderful to say the least.  It is a true honor to read you when you are so full of love and sentiment.  Now that is one lucky gal for sure.  

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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SEA
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with you
2 posted 2000-12-11 04:35 PM

SO SWEET!!! See??? This is what SEA means.......love this   -SEA
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-12-11 04:38 PM

lol @ Mark...and yes, she is a lucky gal indeed...but better warn her, you DO have a bodyguard...(serenity flex's her muscle and breaks out into a sweat...) Good to know that you're smiling again, Michael. Too cute!
Startime
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4 posted 2000-12-11 04:43 PM

*sigh* Looks like your heart has been claimed, my friend. I don't know you well, but I envy the lady who has won you. My blessings to you both in your love. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com
Martie
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5 posted 2000-12-11 04:44 PM

Michael---Ain't love grand...it sure writes good on you!
Severn
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6 posted 2000-12-11 04:46 PM

I better be the target!

*wink*

Hehe...good stuff my friend, good stuff.

K
Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-12-11 05:15 PM

Ok Ok, what's her name?
things 'round her
won't be the same...
imagine you now
all in love
roof's falling in
from high above
OK OK what's her name
and really now tell us
what's her game
did she hook you
with her line and sinker
tell us please oh for sure
she surely's not a clinker...

OK OK, now tell us 'Deer...
who's leading you 'round by the ear?


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2000-12-11 05:23 PM

Balladeer,
You captured all the erotica of the school boy. I would say that's damn good.
Charisma
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9 posted 2000-12-11 05:28 PM

*sigh* wonderful spoken........who ever she is, she is a lucky woman
lovely piece that breathe a lot of love....

Charisma
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Hurricane Alley
10 posted 2000-12-11 05:28 PM

*sigh* Exuberantly wonderful!!!    
Lady Lightning
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11 posted 2000-12-11 06:25 PM

My, My Deer..what beautiful words you write...So utterly full of LOVE...I liked..much...     ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown
maxtec1
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Garland, Tx
12 posted 2000-12-11 06:28 PM

Very Good writting. I really liked thid poem.
Love and light.
Richard
Lady Lightning
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Kentucky
13 posted 2000-12-11 06:57 PM

I just figured out how to add these to my library..so here I am again doing just that...    ~LL~
inot2B
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Arkansas
14 posted 2000-12-11 07:25 PM

Sweet, you've come out
just so you can shout
that you love her so.
I just hope Toerag doesn't
think it was for him you
were talking about.
Nan
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15 posted 2000-12-11 07:31 PM

Gotta LOVE'r..??!!??
Janet Marie
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16 posted 2000-12-11 07:43 PM

Come on now Michael ... SPEAK UP .. dont be shy
dont hold anything back ...  please go ahead and try
your among friends ...  so say whats on your mind
theres no need to mince your words ... leave the hesitation behind

If you got something to say...then say it here
Speak slowly  now... make sure your message is crystal clear
You have our undivided attention ..we hang on every word
for when you speak your heart so true... we dont want to miss a single word

*********

later-earning more spammy kisses-gator  
jm


Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know
Irish Rose
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17 posted 2000-12-11 07:48 PM


Forget the library, this poem belongs on the mantle over a roaring fire, what a lovely display of love!  Someone is very blessed.< !signature-->



"Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version
of someone else." Marilyn Monroe

                              

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-11-2000).]
Kit McCallum
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18 posted 2000-12-11 08:07 PM

Well holy smokes, I'll tell you what,
She's lucky as can be,
This gal who's got you all riled up,
On an "I love you" spree!

She's got you singing love songs,
With enthusiastic zest,
I'm sure she can't resist your charms,
For you're the very best!!!  

Loved this Michael ... excitement just flies right through the screen in this wonderful poem!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2000-12-11 08:16 PM

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Corinne
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20 posted 2000-12-11 08:42 PM

YOU ARE THE SWEETEST, DEER.

Corinne
Sunshine
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21 posted 2000-12-11 09:02 PM

Sorry, 'Dear, but MARGE....did you count each and every one!...too precious...you must be IT!

Hugs to you all!  This is WAY too cute!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ
Denise
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22 posted 2000-12-11 09:31 PM

Three little words that a loved one can never hear enough! This is sweet, Balladeer!

Denise
Balladeer
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23 posted 2000-12-11 10:44 PM

Mark...LOL! I hope LJA doesn't get the wrong idea! You never know with him   Than you, sir!

SEA...Yes! That is EXACTLY what it means! Thank you!!  

serenity...geez! I LOVE it when you flex your muscles! Thank you, o great protector!  

Startime...My heart claimed? Whatever gave you that idea? back atcha, sweet lady  

Martie...sure writes good on you? What a fantastic line! Thank you!!  

Severn...your bullseye is too small to hit! (but I'll keep trying   )

sunshine...what's her name? Puddin' tane. Ask me again..I'll tell you the same! LOVED your response!  

Sy...it helps when one has the intelligence of a schoolboy! Thanks for droppin' in...

Charisma...yeah, she's lucky...and very elusive!   Thank you....

deVine one...we all need to exube once in a while  

LL...yes, I'm full of it! Thank you for these nice words  

maxtec...thank you, Richard  

inot2B...I always run that risk! I'll know if I get another Valentine from him!  

Nan....good question!!!

Janet Marie...I'm trying real hard to break my shyness. When I do, you'll be the first to know!  

Rose...on the mantle over a roaring fire...I love it!  

Kit...excitement flies in your response, too! I LOVE it! Thank you!!!  

Marge....you are certifiably insane!!! You're the best! I have NEVER gotten 700 I Love You's from ANYONE! I cherish every one of them...and YOU!!!  

Corinne...I've MISSED you! Thank you!  

Denise...thank you!!!!!!!!!!
doreen peri
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Virginia
24 posted 2000-12-11 11:01 PM

marge, you CRACK ME UP!!!!!
    
i LOVE YOU!!! no... wait... er...
well... i do but...

here's one more for The Balladeer... which brings the count up to 701...

are the votes all in now??? i demand a recount!!! let's take it to the Supremes...STOP! In the Name of Love!... ladida.. or something... (and yes, i think the eggnog has got to me but what does that have to do with the vote??? this IS Florida, isn't it? no? what do you mean, it's only the internet... awwwwwwgeeeezzzzz)

ok... well, whatever.. i placed my vote.

peace and love and happiness and all that rot

bahhumbug *grin*ch

- all you can ever really ask out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry -
Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
25 posted 2000-12-11 11:08 PM

Mr. 'Deer......
It's so nice to hear a man say how he feels!!
Was wonderful to read, and so refreshing!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@
SwEeTnSeXy18
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nc
26 posted 2000-12-11 11:11 PM

bal~

this is simply beautiful! full of that
huge heart of yours. the love comes
shining through and makes me smile. so
glad to see that you are so happy! can't
think of anyone who deserves it more than
you! love looks good on you...take care
~amy~
Kethry
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27 posted 2000-12-12 01:21 AM

Deer, so you're in love, I wish you the best
you're a man who deserves to be blest
I hope she knows she'll be cherished
hey what's this funny pain in my breast

So your in love,well hip hooray
invite me to your wedding day
I wish you well, what's that you say
they're only tears that won't go away.

You're well in love, you shout it loud
I'm so happy it makes me proud
I will cheer with all this passionate crowd
Not I'm not sorry,well maybe a little, I'm allowed.

Hey maybe I'm  back
Keth< !signature-->

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau




[This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 12-12-2000).]
Irie
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28 posted 2000-12-12 01:28 AM

~*Irie Jumps up and down excitedly*~

I LOVE IT!!!
Oh to be so in love and feel so giddy!  
Funa nd loving poem 'deer  


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"
LngJhnAg
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29 posted 2000-12-12 07:49 AM

Mark - That was a pathetic attempt at humor!  If you had used Toerag's name instead of mine, it would have been wonderful.  Do you see the difference?  lol  Classic!

'Deer - I cannot believe all these women are swooning - well, I guess I can.  If they only knew you were seeing your reflection in the monitor while you were writing - lol.
Lorelei54
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30 posted 2000-12-12 10:37 AM

adding my "amen" to what Marge said
I Love You
(forgive me LJA, but!)
Balladeer
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31 posted 2000-12-12 10:34 PM

Doreen...and you crack me up...still!   No, there will be no recount here!...but wanna share some of that egg-nog?  

Sunny1...we should do it more often! Thank you!!!

amy...you sure live up to your name..what a sweet thing to say..thank you very much!!  

kethry..MAYBE you're back? ROFL!!! With this little display of your humor and cutting wit, you ARE back! (and I am SO glad!)  

Irie...giddy is a wonderful word!! thank you for jumping up and down!  

LJA...ROFL!!! You peeking in my windows again?  

Lorelei...you warm my heart..hey, LongJohn...PPBBBRRRTTTT!!!!!  
Temptress
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32 posted 2000-12-13 01:14 AM

This is the picture of sweetness, and boyish like love! Reminds me well of things...
Poertree
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UK
33 posted 2000-12-13 05:25 AM

I love it

~smile~

philip
Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania
34 posted 2000-12-13 08:57 AM

Marge, you are the best!

Balladeer, You said it loud and clear in this delightful poem.
Perfect, as always
Liz
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