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Five Minutes.............. |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I had a dream of you last night that ache revisited.......the one that was never really gone the silent wish that hammers on my heart so quietly, only I can hear it ~ feel it I try to be strong....... who am I kidding? I'm pathetic I miss you so much........ Seeing your brown eyes knowing it was a dream......and not caring I got to hold you, talk to you, see your smile my sweet friend........ Just five minutes....... God please, tell me why tourtured by dreams......... I'm supposed to be able to forget and pretend I don't care. ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah SEA...he should hold you for eternity... Hugs... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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nicolette Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42St. Paul, Minnesota |
That poem was beautiful. I hope he comes to hold you soon. Take care, Nicolette |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
SEA I hope it works out. poem was heartfelt and i felt it there |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ it will never happen........he has his life and I don't seem to exist there.... Nicolette~ thank you, no he won't......I have my husband for that......he has his wife....I just miss my friend  Walt~ I wish it could work out, but I know better......this dream just hurt, I was trying so hard to forget him, he seems to have forgotten all about me..... -SEA |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
SEA, I know it doesn't feel that way now, but you will find someone who will make you feel even better than he does, because he'll be there for you. Good work...I could feel your pain. Kris All good poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings...~William Wordsworth |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Warmhrt~ it's not like that.......my husband is better than any man I've ever known......I'm referring to a man who was my best friend for 14 years........ I miss my friend. Thank you -SEA |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Beautiful poem Sea. Holidays just add to the longing too. Happy holidays Rich |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, yes that's it exactly, someone who was a really close friend suddenly drops out of your exisistance and you think why. And you miss them, I know this feeling well. I lost one of my forever friends when she ran off with my ex. (I don't miss him, but oh how I miss her.) And it was all for nothing because he ran out on her too. But she is eaten up with guilt and won't accept that I'm thankful she took him off my hands. (Doesn't that sound callous, and you know I'm not!) So I just hope that one day she can forgive herself enough to have a conversation with me. Wonderful piece Circe, so expressive and real, utterly wonderful work. Take care Mushy And remember if you need to yell I'm all ears.  take care of yourself and remember to keep looking ahead.Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
HUGS sweetheart |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rich~ thanks Happy Holidays to you too!Marsha~ it hurts...I know, I hope she talks to you soon RG~ HUGS back to ya, thank you  -SEA |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i know the feelings... i used to not want to sleep just so i wouldn't have to deal with this girl... sometimes five minutes is too much. a well penned verse. "The bar is always open, the time is always right. If God's good word goes unspoken, then the music plays all night." |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
psst, Circe - MY eyes are BLUE! *batting eyelashes flirtatiously* The best way to forget somebody is to have a cheap one night stand with a man. Since the cheaper the better works in this case, I will have to bow out, but Toerag might be available, and he's as cheap as you can get - lol |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope your friendship lives on...James |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Wee I have green eyes. LOL well I tried the one night stand. It did not work for me. It left me feeling empty. Think I want real love. Very good poem. Love and light, Richard |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
SEA...Sorry you are hurting, think of all the good times...sometimes it helps...Big Hugs to you... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, I've been there. I see, I feel, I know, and I'm so terribly sorry! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
I know how you feel here, SEA. And, it doesn't help a bit when the dreams don't stop. Great writing! sp 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ethan~ thank you so much LngJhnAg~ You are too silly.....if I want a one night stand, I just roll over and grab my hubby James~ that's all I ever wanted Richard~ I never have been and never could be a one night stand kind of girl......I'll flirt like hell, but that's different LL~ I do think of the good times, and I miss them it just hurts to realize, I loved him and cared for our friendship more than he did.... Rosemary~ sorry you can relate, thank you SP~ thanks, it's been a while since the last dream.......guess I was just due...... -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Sea, hear the yearning in this wonderful penned poem..... hope that you will meet your friend back. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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