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SEA
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0 posted 2000-12-12 09:50 AM



I had a dream of you last night
that ache revisited.......the one that was never really gone
the silent wish that hammers on my heart
so quietly, only I can hear it ~ feel it

I try to be strong.......
who am I kidding?
I'm pathetic
I miss you so much........

Seeing your brown eyes
knowing it was a dream......and not caring
I got to hold you, talk to you, see your smile
my sweet friend........

Just five minutes.......
God please, tell me why
tourtured by dreams.........
I'm supposed to be able to forget
and pretend I don't care.

~SEA~


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1 posted 2000-12-12 09:57 AM


Ah SEA...he should hold you
for eternity...

Hugs...


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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2 posted 2000-12-12 10:17 AM


That poem was beautiful.  I hope he comes to hold you soon.  Take care, Nicolette
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3 posted 2000-12-12 10:19 AM


SEA I hope it works out. poem was heartfelt and i felt it there
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4 posted 2000-12-12 10:41 AM


Sunshine~ it will never happen........he has his life and I don't seem to exist there....

Nicolette~ thank you, no he won't......I have my husband for that......he has his wife....I just miss my friend  

Walt~ I wish it could work out, but I know better......this dream just hurt, I was trying so hard to forget him, he seems to have forgotten all about me.....

-SEA

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5 posted 2000-12-12 11:06 AM


SEA,

I know it doesn't feel that way now, but you will find someone who will make you feel even better than he does, because he'll be there for you.

Good work...I could feel your pain.

Kris

All good poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings...~William Wordsworth

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Warmhrt~ it's not like that.......my husband is better than any man I've ever known......I'm referring to a man who was my best friend for 14 years........ I miss my friend. Thank you   -SEA
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7 posted 2000-12-12 11:12 AM


Beautiful poem Sea. Holidays just add to the longing too. Happy holidays
Rich

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8 posted 2000-12-12 11:49 AM


Circe, yes that's it exactly, someone who was a really close friend suddenly drops out of your exisistance and you think why. And you miss them, I know this feeling well. I lost one of my forever friends when she ran off with my ex. (I don't miss him, but oh how I miss her.) And it was all for nothing because he ran out on her too. But she is eaten up with guilt and won't accept that I'm thankful she took him off my hands. (Doesn't that sound callous, and you know I'm not!) So I just hope that one day she can forgive herself enough to have a conversation with me.
Wonderful piece Circe, so expressive and real, utterly wonderful work.
Take care
            Mushy
And remember if you need to yell I'm all ears.   take care of yourself and remember to keep looking ahead.


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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9 posted 2000-12-12 01:50 PM


HUGS sweetheart
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Rich~ thanks   Happy Holidays to you too!

Marsha~ it hurts...I know, I hope she talks to you soon  

RG~ HUGS back to ya, thank you  

-SEA

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11 posted 2000-12-12 03:37 PM


i know the feelings... i used to not want to sleep just so i wouldn't have to deal with this girl...
sometimes five minutes is too much.

a well penned verse.

"The bar is always open,
the time is always right.
If God's good word goes unspoken,
then the music plays all night."


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12 posted 2000-12-12 03:45 PM


psst, Circe - MY eyes are BLUE!  *batting eyelashes flirtatiously*  The best way to forget somebody is to have a cheap one night stand with a man.  Since the cheaper the better works in this case, I will have to bow out, but Toerag might be available, and he's as cheap as you can get - lol
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13 posted 2000-12-12 03:54 PM


Hope your friendship lives on...James
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14 posted 2000-12-12 04:21 PM


Wee I have green eyes. LOL well I tried the one night stand. It did not work for me. It left me feeling empty. Think I want real love.
Very good poem.
Love and light,
Richard

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15 posted 2000-12-12 06:51 PM


SEA...Sorry you are hurting, think of all the good times...sometimes it helps...Big Hugs to you... ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

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16 posted 2000-12-12 07:03 PM


Oh, I've been there.  I see, I feel, I know, and I'm so terribly sorry!


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17 posted 2000-12-12 07:52 PM


I know how you feel here, SEA.  And, it doesn't help a bit when the dreams don't stop.  Great writing!

sp  


'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me...

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18 posted 2000-12-12 08:08 PM


Ethan~ thank you so much  

LngJhnAg~ You are too silly.....if I want a one night stand, I just roll over and grab my hubby  

James~ that's all I ever wanted  

Richard~ I never have been and never could be a one night stand kind of girl......I'll flirt like hell, but that's different  

LL~ I do think of the good times, and I miss them it just hurts to realize, I loved him and cared for our friendship more than he did....  

Rosemary~ sorry you can relate, thank you  

SP~ thanks, it's been a while since the last dream.......guess I was just due......  

-SEA

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19 posted 2000-12-13 08:59 AM


oh Sea, hear the yearning in this wonderful penned poem.....
hope that you will meet your friend back.

((hugs))
Charisma

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