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To JM From Stinky
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To JM From Stinky |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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To JM From Stinky A sensor light goes off my head From what I read before I bed What did she write what did she say In tribute and in laughing way. An answering gist that shines a light That brightens up my dreamers night A busy bee my oversee She thinks herself just bourgeoise. She's not a chancy or fancy But full of prudent fluency Not an angel not a dove But most certainly a love. Sets the law down unto me Will not hear the term oldie Full of life and chaos de vivre Calls herself my winkiewinkie. And I reciprocate with stinky By signing yours, your stinky winkie She delights me with her charm Almost to the point of alarm. She's a one of a kind mother hen That I'm sure will never again. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!CLAPPING WITH GREAT DELIGHT!!!How very wonderful. Too cute this is. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She will love it... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Isn't she, though? That's our girl! Thank you seymour. She deserves a smile in return for the many she has given us. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now if this don't get her in the Christmas spirit I don't know what will. You have described her PERFECTLY and I too have heard that "MOTHER HEN" tone of hers MANY times. She is most definitely one worth writing about and even more so deserving to be penned by one of your remarkable talents. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Old your not ... nor will you ever be ... so promise now ... you'll not use that word in my company A little chaos will keep your randy dragon feeling spry a well placed *winkiewinkie* keeps a twinkle in your eye thank you for this smile given from your gifted pen ... and dont make this chickie repeat her self again You're as young ... as your poetry is cool ... trust me stinky ... this hen's mother didnt raise no fool ************* thank you sweet Sy...ya made my day with this... put a smile on my face and across my heart... Your charm sets of some bells and alarms of your own  later-sweet-stinky-gator love ya jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, Thank you for the bravo. Sunshine, Glad you think so. *L* Serenity, I think so, thanks for the great comment. Mark, Beautiful comment, thank you. JM, I know there's method to your guile And I am glad I made you smile. Forget about that ugly word It's only a tease and absurd. But if you will the outer shell Then I will susrely ring your bell. And rhyme you into fantasy Until you up and dance with me. Platonic and in childish prank I would you not think me a crank Winkiewinkie stinky. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Awwwe That's me SS  love it Sy and in the words of the great JM.....you are way cool!! |
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