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You Take Pen in Hand
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You Take Pen in Hand |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You take pen in hand and I sigh. Holding my breath you know why. The words you cannot say to me Come from your pen most eloquently. I wait to read words you never speak Words that thrill me and leave me weak Your truth is pure your soul sublime I hunger for each loving rhyme And though our bodies never meet I’ve felt your touch in your words, my sweet. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Poet De Vine so few words so much to say, excellent work here. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Poet deVine...really enjoyed the rhyme...she does that to me all the time...that little poet of mine...... I really enjoy your work of words. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and people wonder how you can fall in love with just words. . . excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Sharon I hear you and I feel this piece extremely well. I would say hang in there but I know that you like to write from the perspective of the onlooker. Good write! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sometimes words touch us in a way no physical touch can, Sharon. This was a beautiful reminder. Michael |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PDV, this is sooooo good... I really enjoyed the read thank you  Coco |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
PoetDevine, Great writing there. Always a pleasure to read your work. Fantastic. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I sure hope you are submitting this somewhere...lol...and a wink! another beauty...but how can you miss? |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon- this is beautiful. really enjoyed reading it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{~,^} this likes me, oh yes, it does... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for you kind words. This is simple - we do touch each others lives with our words. You've touched mine and I'm so grateful for that.  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sharon this fabulouso!! So simple, yet it says SO much! I love this one! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Sharon - need I say?: - you spoke not only to me - but for me - just lovely, just perfect |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I'm sure all would agree that there is nothing like the heart of a poet... beautiful poem... -Tier |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Your truth is pure your soul sublime I hunger for each loving rhyme" Beautiful thoughts Sharon ... so sweet and tenderly written, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhhh, such lovely thoughts Sharon, so tenderly penned. Bonnie |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so beautiful... I love to open your poems... I never know whether I'll be laughing or crying or just sitting in wonder when I finish... but I know I'll have been touched by the pen of a master! *S* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw! PDV I didn't know I had that affect on you gosh I'll have to throw in a real heartbeater next time...he he Great poem PDV wonderful reflection on your reflections. Love the indication that as the reader you could imagine such a wonderful author is really saying these things to you....take care.....ethome......... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah devine one...this needed to see the light of night again...oh so true... and who is it we write for...the male, the female...all or just ourselves... and will we ever really know how we might have touched someone... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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