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Open Poetry #11

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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2000-12-09 08:45 AM

In your walking, across frost,
I follow,
I’m not stalking, only lost,
Stepping in your steps lightly,
I follow,
Hearing as you hum brightly,
Wondering why you’re merry
I follow,
Listening it’s not scary
As entering into light,
I follow
The coloring of the night,
Everywhere is rainbow hue,
I follow,
Portal glows you go into
And away where I can’t go,
No follow.

Outside the inside, watching and hearing,
Inside joyful rise, singing and cheering,
And footprints walking now returning back,
Goes shadows slinking low returns to black.

Gloom

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2000-12-09 09:04 AM

We follow as long as we are allowed, and then we're on our own. I enjoyed reading this one, as it gave me new insight!!

Write on!
-<--<--{(@

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2000-12-09 11:45 AM

You do your moniker justice here.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2000-12-09 08:16 PM

always enjoy your creative forms Professor

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2000-12-09 09:54 PM

Thank you, Sunny1
Glad I could give you a bit of enjoyment,
We follow often times drawn by our desires.

Thank you, Interloper,
My writing is usually from my mood
And that mood is me.

Thank you, Victoria,
Form is an important part of my poetry

Gloom

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2000-12-09 09:59 PM

Gloom, I enjoy the way you put your moods into verse for everyone to enjoy. This one made me think.....it's good good stuff. *s*
~D~

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2000-12-09 11:31 PM

Thank you, Gentle Spirit,
You give me high praise,
To record emotions in poetry that makes
People think is what poetry is all about.

Gloom

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