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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2000-12-11 02:33 PM




Words break barriers once sunken in stone
Batter me down with your sharp eloquence
The walls, the beams, the foundation lay prone
Take cover in your well of newfound defense

Words can tumble the architecturally sound
Brother’s stone house 'side mine made of brick
The interwoven details of the blueprints are found
That one word can shatter either so thick

Words are worms that burrow tiny long holes
Through innocence we dig and grasp them to share
Words to the wise have their well-crafted rolls
But for some they are used to raise neck hairs

Words aren’t language to be dead from the young
Words base thoughts into action or dreams
Words from the heart or words from the tongue
Words slip 'long course of babbling streams

(little tiny micro-soft words)





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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-12-11 02:36 PM


quote:

Words slip 'long the course of babbling streams


If you ever need a cave, I know where one is selling cheap...

sounds like you need some peace of time my friend...

we're all here for you...
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Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ





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Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
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on the roof again
2 posted 2000-12-11 02:37 PM


your wisdom is unbounded as is your style.
absolutley provacative.

"The bar is always open,
the time is always right.
If God's good word goes unspoken,
then the music goes all night."



Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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3 posted 2000-12-11 02:39 PM


Words can be soothing to the heart and soul, dear one. This was beautifully written. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


serenity blaze
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4 posted 2000-12-11 02:40 PM


I just love when you dig deep walty! and I too, wish you peace. Great job with this.
Irish Rose
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5 posted 2000-12-11 02:40 PM


as long as the neck hairs are not babbling, I'm ok....



"Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version
of someone else." Marilyn Monroe


wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
6 posted 2000-12-11 02:43 PM


woah i never gotten 5 replies in like three minutes before. thanky all for the words yuh
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