Open Poetry #11 |
One Way to Heaven - Acrostic |
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
One Way to Heaven Off into the distance, Near the bright celestial sky, Eternity waits patiently, for Wayward souls to fly. Awaken to the wonderment, Yield willingly to Him, Triumphant in the knowledge Of a better world within. Hold tight to your convictions, Ever seeking kinder ways, Attitude enriched with love ... Vigilance portrayed. Enter to another realm, lift up your heart to sing, Nourished in the depths of love, that sweet salvation brings. /Kit McCallum |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sounds like a wonderful prayer to me.. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kit, this is utterly wonderful, you are soooooo good at these you really are. Of course you are so good at them all, but these you are brilliant at. (It takes me ages to do these and when I've finished they are still not great) Really excellant writing from you love, very well done. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ My, my ... what a lovely way to start my day. Thank you for these beautiful thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Kit, love this wonderful piece, superb Charisma |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautiful, peaceful poem, how very creative and unqiue! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Another one for the library...very peaceful. |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
forgot to click on add to library...lol |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Seems to me that you have all the answers in this one my friend. What a beauty to be treated to on this wonderful day. I am so glad to see you posting again that I could just let out a big YEEEEEEHHHHHHAAAAAWWWWWWWW just for you. Well what do you know, I just did. ======== Oh btw...do you know what time it is? No silly, not the time on the clock. Yeppers you guessed it. I think it is time for a little holiday challenge for you. You up for it? Good, check your other post. I will have to go find it now and see what I can come up with for you wonderful muse. Hope it has not gone on holiday yet. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Denise
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Wonderful message, great acrostic! Love it! Denise |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Nan: Thanks Nan! I'm feeling a little of that Christmas Spirit lately! ~Marsha: Thank you for these beautiful words Marsha ... I really find I'm enjoying these. This one's a sequal to another I did in the Spiritual Journey's Forum the other day ... ~Marge: You are sooooo very welcome, I'm glad it started your day well my friend! ~Charisma: Thank you for this sweet response ... I'm so glad you enjoyed! ~Melissa: Just taking a peaceful moment to rejuvenate my soul Melissa, thanks for the lovely comment! ~Elizabeth: Thanks for commenting on both Elizabeth ... I've really enjoyed writing these! ~Mark: LOL ... thank you for this sweet reply! I've missed you ... and I'll admit, you've got me stumped so far on that challenge ... I'm blanking ... ack! (but I'll not give up, better late than never, right?) ~Denise: I'm glad you enjoyed Denise ... and am very grateful for your sweet response! Much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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