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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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The wonder of love grows deep within magically appears like the dew at dawn eyelash of the sun peeking behind the mountain petals of a red rose smiling in the morn the wonder of love taps you on the shoulder creeping in the night.. a shadow whispering like the wind in the dark prism of a snowflake upon your window the wonder of love kisses you on the cheek like the fragrance of lavender rain the first leaf blushing in the autumn clouds of mandarin orange at sunset the wonder of love is a magic wand touching the secret places of your heart < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-29-2000).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"petals of a red rose smiling in the morn" Lovely poem. Nicely written. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
beautiful imagry..would that it could be thus..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The wonder of love is all those things....and more. Beautifully said..... |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
very nice. a sweet little lovely poem that made me smile. i hope to feel like this again =) great job. love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Poeminister..thank you very much..glad you liked.. pegasus111..thank you for peeking in.. Balladeer..thank you for visiting deery Jesse..you will find the wonder of love again jesse..thank you for reading.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Victoria~ So beautiful.....so lovely.....I enjoyed this very much! -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"like the fragrance of lavender rain" What a beautiful way to describe the rain! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you sea and irish rose..so happy you both enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
the wonder of love is a magic wand touching the secret places of your heart ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ how true are these words, you penned an excellent and lovely piece of love. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Victoria~ Such sweet, lovely imagery enshrouds your words in beauty, that neither the eye nor the heart can refrain from dancing with delight at the lovely dreams painted by your poet's pen! I love it!!!!!! Love YA~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Charisma and Terry...appreciate your kind words...HUGS.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Some truly memorably beautiful lines in this.Thank you. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Victoria, Love is a wonder. This is so beautifully written, by one of the best. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Tony..Im so glad you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Victoria-Such sweet words, yet powerful in their meaning. I'm glad you shared, I liked. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Daniel..didnt see you sneak in ha..and thank you so much for your kind words...nice to hear from you as always.. Gemini..thank you..and for taking time to read appreciate your comments..~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Loved it!!!!!!!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you vandana..pleased you enjoyed ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
a magic wand...that pretty much says it all. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes it does feel like being touched by a magic wand..thank you tara..nice to hear from you tonight.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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