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Sonrise
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Sonrise |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
Sonrise It's piled on and on, more and more weight, 'Ever be a new dawn, can living be great? Lying here thinking, momma and grandma... you've no longer got 'em, I see you sinkin' and I dive toward the bottom. I dry up your feelings And the best way to cope, Continue to write and never say nope. I dry up your healings, Never leave yours behind, Continue to pray with you, Jim and Walt will be fine. But if it's his turn, Walter forever altered, A candle 4ever inBurns, His love never falters. It's understood, nobody can change it, All are protected by His invisible blanket. Your life has been painted, You're the new sonrisin', A new boy is sainted, Now, an unbound horizon. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
that was an amazing peace of work. i like some of those rhymes you used too... the wordplay on sunrise is very clever. an excellent piece to start things off. Welcome to Passions. i hope your stay helps you grow as much as it has helped me. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Cruz, Well done, and welcome to Passions. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. I see many meanings in this and the name of one of our most-loved members. Please check your mail for a special greeting.  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice indeed... Something about this work just seems to Burn some allusions into my mind...  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Thanx cruz this really made me emotional. I busted out with excitement to see you had posted and when I saw it was bout me I was truely touched. Jim, my step-dad is in the ICU and is not doing well but when I went to go see him last night his eyes turned my way so who knows. Thanx cruz  |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
Ethan_Halo - Thanx for the comments and the welcomes. I look forward to exploring some of your artwork. Daniel J D - Thanx! Poet deVine - 2U - A special, great-big, outtasight, dynamite - !thanX! for the welcome and email! Nan - Thanx for your time! Allusions are cool! wayoutwalt - thanx, mission accomplished ... we've gotta talk... |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Cute  ). Sonrise...Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions. wonderful penned, love and enjoyed reading it. Charisma |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Loving it... K |
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