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To My Poetic Wife
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To My Poetic Wife |
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Weave_Watcher Junior Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 21 |
I needed a little shove Before I told her she was my love But as time went by It became my unconditional cry It is my belief Her love brings hearts relief She's a golden treasure That brings my soul pleasure Her smile lights me on fire Making her happy my only desire As you all can see She was made just for me To all of you She can make you laugh and cry She can make you shiver and sigh For in her poetic weave She makes you believe That her heart is true I LOVE YOU MY WIFE [This message has been edited by Weave_Watcher (edited 11-18-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great tribute to the wife weave..sounds like a marvelous lady...good poem I enjoyed the read.....keep em comin.....ethome.... |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I am sure she is glad that she gave you that shove. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a sweet and sincere tribute to your wife ... Im quiet sure there is a certain butterfly smiling right now  Welcome to Passions WW ...I look forward to more of your work jm |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
She sounds like a wonderful woman.. and you sound like a very happy man.... Welcome to Passions!! Dakota |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I know you swear that this will be your only poem...but with me as your muse...better keep a pencil handy sweetie  I'm very proud of you for posting this as a gift to me...after being married for this long you think I would have known there was a weaver in there  Love you too~You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Weave, Good thoughts, good words, good poem. Welcome to passions. |
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Weave_Watcher Junior Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 21 |
Thank you to all of you she is a wonderful woman. Thanks for your replies. Jan thanks for your KIND words. I'll be looking forward to my hunting poem from you or my pen just might have one more rhyme in it about a cave...oh no I mean a cagggggggg...awwe heck you know what I mean. Later-chicken-gator Butterfly my wife you make my world go round and I love you. You know I'm a reader not a writer but I had to write just one for you. And hun, what's a muse? [This message has been edited by Weave_Watcher (edited 11-19-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Now listen here see My wife wrote one and only one poem for me and then she clammed up you had better write more than this for her cuz once she has seen it she'll nag: "Aww come on that was sooo awesome you gotta write you gotta write more..." that's what i say at least |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
WW: I love your work - you have to write more!!! Roniece |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
WW.......you did great. I think you are both lucky. I hope to see more from you. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Weave_Watcher- WELCOME to Passions! this is beautiful...what a loving and heartfelt tribute to a very special person. 'She can make you laugh and cry She can make you shiver and sigh For in her poetic weave She makes you believe That her heart is true' so true this is, and we are very fortunate to have her here. i look forward to reading lots more from you. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
First of all I would like to join everyone else and welcome you to Passions. This is just such a wonderful expression of your love for a very special person! I am sure that we shall see more of your work. Take care!"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Weave_Watcher Junior Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 21 |
Walt thx for your reply but computers and me we dont get along very well thx again. Alan, Vicky and Roniece thx for reading and your replies but I think I will leave the writing to BDC Eagle thx for your welcome, your reply and more than that thank you for being a friend to my wife that she can count on and talk to. Means alot to both of us. Thx again. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Welcome to passions...enjoyed your lovely poem...dont feel bad about the muse thing..i didnt know either at first haa.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
yeah this was a lovely tribute, just the one you say? awwww want to hear more Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Lovely tribute to the one you love... Welcome! (from another new comer) *smiles* -Tier |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions. Someone is very blessed. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
First I have to join in and say welcome to passions, and secondly I have to tell you that I am sure BDC loved this immensely, there is no greater gift to a woman than a gift of words from a heart. Well done. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Weave_Watcher Junior Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 21 |
Victoria, Maria, Tier, Irish rose and Gentle spirit thx for the welcomes and the kind replies. I really only expected a few replies (the ones my wife paid to reply) so all of the replies that I have gotten is a suprise. BDC is special to me and I posted this so she could see my love for her in a weave. Thx again. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome to the posting side of Passions and just to let you know...you made a wonderful start with this poem. It is always nice to see a husband and wife posting together and writing for each other but when one means as much to the masses as your butterfly then it means so much more. Your show of love in your poem goes much further than the words in it and I look forward to reading more of your works. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Such beautiful words to our beautiful Butterfly. Thank you WW |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Weave Watcher--What a loving look you have...and a beautiful heart...Welcome to Passions. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written...enjoyed your poetry. |
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Weave_Watcher Junior Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 21 |
Mark, Martie and Mike sorry for the delay in getting a thank you in here, but I wanted to make sure I said thanx and I really appreciate it. Mother Earth, Thanks you know her as well as I do so you know this is true. Say Hi to Father Time for us![This message has been edited by Weave_Watcher (edited 11-22-2000).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Well done and welcome to Passions, this is a real reminder for the many who have forgotten their wives' love. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Weaver, What is evident is that you love your wife, so do we. What is not evident is why you can't see your own talent. Welcome to passions and I say with hope... Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions.....love this wonderful tribute to your loved one. well done. Charisma |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Awww... this is beautiful. You have a great way with words. Welcome to passions. Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
*bump* Remember: maintaining a positive attitude may not solve all your problems, but it will certainly annoy enough people to make it worth the effort. |
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Weave_Watcher Junior Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 21 |
Daniel, Kethry, Charisma, Sauni and Skyfyre, Thx for your kind replies. Everyone here at passions is great THX agian to everyone. |
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