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White Gold |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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WHITE GOLD Karen Torbiak 2000 They call me Dream Weaver for I am she who enters your nights to spin fantasy of your desires The desires I cherish most are the ones that sparkle in your minds like diamonds, precious to behold I speak of love, the hearts desire, of souls to join ,bodies to be entwined and spirits to share throughout all time As I stand beside your bed I see the color of love that sets the dream in weave for your enjoyment When Red filters into view I feel hot juices flow for passion is the color of love to you when I do what dream weavers do Of hands that touch and lips that master your love responds with unbound passion Of entrance into loves passion heat you join as one to feel complete and blend your juices as you reach the mountain of desire Sky Blue this one I find of gentle love dwells in this mind makes love’s sweet touch the most desired On moonlight I will build this dream where two may walk and magic share as fingers warm and gentle touch On sands of time their feet left bare with breezes sent to soothe the heat and ocean beach the world they share strolling under harvest moon Bright yellow radiates from you for love is sweet of scent and taste as love defines the strength of time Sweet love sharing lover’s swing in summer’s soft evening shows two in quiet pose arms holding in peaceful serenity Turquoise is the color filling this room with loves dreams of more to give freedom to dreams I weave The passion here gives magic dreams of two, made one in fantasy and reality on worlds designed by lovers Taste, touch, sound, smell and sight are all combined as one in the world where fantasy starts with a glance or a sound Loves songs are played about while words of love these two will shout that all may share the joy they’ve found Ah yes, this is the one I look for to give lovers full limits that are rarely found White Gold so rare the love here to be found is blending all love’s colors and adding one For souls to shout we are complete the search has ended as our spirits join in understanding Blessed best by God,this love is right, two souls reflect his love as they share all and learn to teach of the most precious love of all Dream Weaver that I be I sing with the heavens when I find True Love, White Gold,that stands the tests of time |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is OUTSTANDING!!! My goodness...what a wonderful poem to make an entrance with.. superb use of metaphor and such depth emotion expressed... excellent imagery and use of comparisons with color. "White gold" vey poetic, very cool.. all laced toghether with passion and sensuality Welcome to Passions.... so very nice to have you here ... I look forward to more of your work take care jm |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Startime... This is a brilliant, it shines as bright as WhiteGold. quote: I love this stanza ....  Welcome to Passions, I certainly will be looking for more of your work! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
A "Star" of pure platinum...nice poem from a nice person....see ya next year gal.....yall be good now ya hear? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
My gosh this board moves fast. I didn't expect so many responses so quickly. Thank you so very much for your warm replies. I am so glad you all enjoyed my first of the Dreams Weavers. I am best known for them where I post. This board has such a loving atmosphere that I know I will enjoy posting here. I will warn you, my Dream Weaver are long because each carries a story weaved within its words. Much love to all of you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Startime, you may DreamWeave all you want...you will find many avid readers. Welcome To Passions...you will find a special e-mail waiting for you. Now, sit back, relax, and enjoy your new home! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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