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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
I Dream I dream of solid grounds Caressed in clouds Of silken feathered pillows I dream of filtered light Drenched in sunlight Never ending rainbows I dream of scented flowers Petal showers Meadow covered forests I dream of singing hearts Endless starts Two souls wrapped in a chorus I dream of trapped wild fires Released desires Forever you and me I dream of breathless kisses Fulfilled wishes I dream of fantasy I dream my love I dream |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
I dream of Hearts free'd Full of lust's Greed Free to relish in the moment I dream of shared Love Like a gift from above Without all this torment I dream of long walks And in depth talks And all that may ensue I dream of Passions Fire And deepest desire Yes My Love, I Dream of YOU! Kat~ Excellent as usual!! Dakota  [This message has been edited by Dakota (edited 11-18-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely!!!! This is so beautiful. Like lyrics to a love song.  |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Wonderful work. It is nice to have sweet dreams... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Kat, this is a splendid write and I so much enjoyed the read thank you for sharing  Coco |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Hopefully when you wake you find your dreams come true. Really do enjoy happy dreams. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kat, DREAM ON! Keth Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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LilPeanut Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 26Pennsylvania, USA |
WOW! Nothing better than to write about thean your dreams I thought this poem was simply beautiful. I must say, the title is what made me want more. For I am a dreamer myself. Very nice poem...loved it. I especially enjoyed "I dream of solid grounds Caressed in clouds Of silken feathered pillows" What a beautiful start to an extremely wonderful poem. Have a wonderful day Kelly |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Love this one Purr Purr I think I'll dream of you tonight! Zzzzzzzzzzzz  |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Love felt when unspoken Your breath to breathe as mine I dream of hearts dancing Souls romancing My forever valentine Dakota: Thank-you so much for your beautiful poem to me. Love is a gift from up above and I hope that one day that dreams such as this do come true. May YOUR dreams come true Dakota. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks! Poet deVine: Thank-you so much! Coming from you, I take it as a great compliment. Alan: Yes it is nice to have sweet dreams. Thanks! Coco: Thanks for the compliment and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! inot2B: Hopefully everyone's dreams can come true. Thanks! Keth: I'm a dreamer keth. I dream! I dream!! LOL Kelly: I'm glad this poem drew you in and I'm even happier that you liked it so much. May your dreams come true. Thanks! insect: I'm glad you loved it! You think you'll dream of me tonight? Hmmmm.. It's been a while since I've responded so I guess you must have had your dream already. Hope it was a good dream or are you still sleeping and it hasn't finished yet? If it hasn't, sleep well and sweet dreams. LOL Zzzzzzzkat |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Wow! A lovely work, indeed. excellent flow & imagery. a great read! -Tier |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
There's nothing more special than being able to dream and release those dreams through poetry is there? What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Kat, I came back to read this one more time and to now thread into my library... Thank you once again for the enjoyable read... Coco |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I loved the feel of this poem. very good writing. love and light, Richard |
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