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Evening Musings..........................
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Evening Musings.......................... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Evening Musings in my Neil Diamond shirt and my leather moccasins I've wrapped my purple flannel robe 'round the outer me and in my inner me I find myself wrapped up in my thoughts things that can't be bought my musings belong to me took off the earrings hours ago laid my necklace down ran my fingers through my hair watched my smile go upside down but only for a moment a minute, more or less then I banished that away asked my smile to stay and it did in spite of silly things said and now I come to you today I read your words listened intently then I heard the hurt from you, the want of him, the joy of babe the love within peace of mind and candles bright, and green eyes in pure sunlight today I read your words not a one has gone unheard now I come to you and wonder will you let me in just a little way let me sing this song to you so in your heart it stays will you let me smooth your brow braid your hair give tender caring now will you let me in, for in a little way some sunshine should belong in every little day and the song shall only be an inner part of harmony I see the sorrow, note the want ~ hear the cry and I long to hug the hi then shake away all good byes on one hand I can't count on two hands even more count my fingers and my toes add my ears and my nose and still the friends here multiply and I wonder in my musings here is where I found I… with my evening musings in my Neil Diamond shirt wondering if you are there wondering if you hurt wondering if you will let me in for just a little while see sunshine needs to shine a bit and share with you her smile… |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
shine on sunshine bright for I know we could all use your light shine on and sing your song so dear I know that I for one can't wait to hear. . . wonderful Sunshine. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, even though I've never seen you, I can picture exactly how you look in this setting...you have described it beautifully...who in the world could ever say no to a smile from sunshine? The way you explain your character's feelings and actions are beyond compare...excellent writing |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
I too could use smiles of sunshine..hope you have lots to go around cause everyone who reads this is gonna be asking for some of them for themselves You are quickly becoming one of my favs here... Thanks for the smile you gave me when I read this... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
This is soo very special - I hope you'll forgive me if I take some inspiration from it - and I really want to thank you for it! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Shine on sweet sunshiny girl Great musings sweetie...wonderful read ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful soft reflective writing Karilea.. you gathered your words to a peak as one would in a song and then slowly allowed the ballad to trickle down across your heart and through the lines....yes everyone needs some Sunshine and this work is a beautiful sunrise and sunset......loved it! Let you in?!? I guess! I just won't let you braid my hair because if Marsha ever got a hold of that ,well, you can imagine...I'd never live it down....wonderful work!! ethome |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
will you let me in, for in a little way some sunshine should belong in every little day and the song shall only be an inner part of harmony very lovely, Sunshine... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shucks, y'all are way too nice, you know that? Thank you everyone... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I do agree.... sunshine belongs in every day, and we here at Passions are so very lucky to have such warming rays to enjoy from you!! Shine on, my friend!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, I haven't been able to give as much time here as I've wanted to today. So my visits have been more like lightening raids than ever. Can I see you in this? Yes love most certainly I can, and very fetching you look too. And I would never turn Sunshine away, and most particually today. One of those days love. But since it's nearly tomorrow here, maybe I'll get the chance to actually read and soothe my soul a little. Wonderful work as always, and you know I love the shirt kid  Now pin that smile back on and glow love glow! You will never be any less than incandescent. (That's me being totally unbias honestly. I'll even take the oath if you like. )Take care kid Majestic Marsha be good (like I am )Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Well done sunshine.....what a warm glow from you. Robert |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'will you let me in, for in a little way some sunshine should belong in every little day and the song shall only be an inner part of harmony' Very warm write, Sunshine! Definitely needed this one today! Loved it!! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sunshine, you light up like the stars in this one, so keep shining! Deb |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'd be very glum without your warming rays, Karilea! Say, sounds like a cool shirt, can I borrow it....hehehe.....I went to see Neil Diamond a few years back when he was in Philly...best show I've ever seen...ever! Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Again, thank you all so much... and denise...can you see it...two 65 year old women going to the next Concert? You call me or I'll call you...whichever he comes to first...LOL...yes, a truly fantastic show! Glad I made you smile! |
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