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A Reason for Rhyme
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A Reason for Rhyme |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
A Reason for Rhyme Virginia Salter wheat fields stand limp in the morning blanket of dew spiders nestle in their self-made trestles cocoons hang from twigs and branches exposed as leaves tumble to their winter beds frosty kisses glisten atop geranium leaves like sugar-coated dressings autumn-painted blessings grace early morning hours as waves of shadow and light dance in sun’s glow six to hundred-legged creatures creep and crawl between the features of the land caressed with time zero to four-limbed beings burrow deep into the seams of soil and of dreams a season to season a reason for rhyme © October 7, 2000 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Bravo!!!How true and you put it so well. I am always amazed by your wonderful use of words. Thank you so much. Much love to you from me Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Virginia! Lovely! Denise |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you Denise and Startime!! This is one of my favorites, so I especially love that you enjoyed it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VAS~ This is an intricate webbing of phrase~ Most delightful to me was ~ 'spiders nestle in their self-made trestles' Most enjoyable. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well woven web wonderfully written  Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Virginia...do we reside next door to each other? for I have seen this picture often, but have failed to put it to word as you have...well done! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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