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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
Hi! It's been a strange weekend. I can't turn it off (the poems). If i pick up a pen, they're there. They're mostly short ones, and i'm on a bit of a "sensory" kick. here goes: -------------first one--------------- A million words cannot equal a kiss. Sweet nothings are whispered by lips. ------------second one--------------- i ache to be near you, endear you, hear you. listening without ears, to what you say without saying a word. i like the shape of this one. who "gets" that? "no coke, pepsi!" -------------third one--------------- My senses make me swim in you. This is how i know Love. i see you breathe, i smell your scent, i hear your heart, i feel your warmth. And it amazes me. Forgive me if i stare. -------------fourth one-------------- In a dream your delicate fingers traced the line of my spine and i shivered...from the heat Damn. I hate alarm clocks. (broke it, too...he he!) -------------fifth one--------------- i was listening to a Jimi Hendricks song called "moon turn the tides... gently, gently away" and scribbled this: (who else hears dolphins near the end?) Sing it, Jimi, sing it. Dance that guitar. Just for me, ignore them. I'm here, i'm listening. Howl! The name says "crazy," and most days, i feel like that....tom "Be yourself, no matter what they say. woooh! I'm an alien..." --Sting "Englishman in New York" |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Fantastic, I loved em', you have had a busy day haven't you . I especialy liked the first one, something that I can emphasise with . Thanks very much . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh yeah...I recognize this.....when poems are rambling....love the read.....and yes my favourite is the first one too. Charisma |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
Hi! Thanks angelswing and Charisma. any sort of feedback is good to hear. but if they say they liked 'em, it's much more fun....tom |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes I like them.....but hey....I'm not an alien..... geez.... yeah I have a smile now. with being myself.   |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Enjoyed these very much! The flavor of each, somewhat similar yet each unique. Your one that mentions coke,pesi at the end caused me to think about a sensory poem relating that special someone's touch to the titillating bubbles of carbonated soda. Don't know if I'll write it, though. It almost seems like you should be the one to do so. This is the first I've read of yours and I'm so glad I did! |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Loved these...My Fav was the third... Enjoyed much.. ~LL~ |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
Hi! VAS, the last two lines of that were commentary! but geez, they fit! your idea, your poem, dude. i was talking about the logo, a bit like yin/yand, but with a stripe in the middle, like the poem. LL, that's just how i see things. thanks...tom |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
enjoyed these weekend ramblings..short and sweet...my favourite kind of poetry keep writing, will you  |
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artsygrl Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 55Florida |
I love to see someone having fun with their creativity...only thing that keeps us sane at times eh?...enjoyed |
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