Open Poetry #11 |
Kiss me love |
Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
I woke up not myself tonight The same familiar blur Stared out into the lack of light Remembering who we were For now my life does not seem right And I cannot endure This same repeating awful sight Of which you hold the cure No comfort from the friends so few Who do not understand They question the things that I do When I speak of your hand And how I would hold it so true Embrace it with a band To prove my ever love for you My hearts only demand Love I beg you please be strong For weakness knows my name I’ve waited oh so very long To find our hearts the same No longer I know right and wrong Or the rules to this game I only know that I belong Inside your picture frame So kiss me love while I’m awake Let lips and worlds collide In this moment let me take You on our lovers ride For you my heart will always ache I long deep down inside For bonds of secrecy to break And fears to now subside [This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 12-04-2000).] |
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PaulF Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 19 |
This is great Kevin, your emotions come through very clearly. Hope it works out for ya. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this..James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you have expressed your feelings very good. love and enjoyed reading it. Charisma |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
thanks guys *cloud 9* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kevin~ this is beautiful! loved this very much. i get so wrapped up in your poetry sometimes i have to tell myself to breathe hehe. take care. ~amy~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved it kevin..nicely done.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
Kevin, I knew this would always happen for ya. You deserve it more than anyone i know. I m so happy for you, and even though sometimes i might not show it, I really am! I hope things work out for the best! Love always Shan |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The words portray a deep love. Be strong and enjoy while you still can. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This is filled with heartfelt emotion and a wonderful read. Much love to you from me Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
makes me wish I were about 30 years younger! "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ Such joy I read in this ! *Hugs* to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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