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New Beginnings....... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
New Beginnings < !signature-->Within the depths of mystical cavern allure Dance spiralling firefly in breeze of cool This place where abandonded hearts retreat When love once dear becomes memory bittersweet Treading carefully upon crevices steep Grasping unto ledge spirits quietly retreat With tilt of head and eyes gazing above A vision of light the embrace of new love Rapidly scurrying each protrude of ledge Not a moment to haste before cavern door slams Atop meadow grass kindred spirts freely soar As new beginnings in life magnificently unfold... ~*Coco*~  "A dream is a wish your heart makes when you're fast asleep... In dreams you will lose your heartaches and whatever you wish for you keep... Have faith in your dreams and someday your rainbows will come smiling thru..." ~Cinderella~ [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-09-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A lovely mystical retreat into alluring new beginnings. Well done Liz |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You weave pictures with your words, and give words to pictures... well done Coco... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Coco, You did all the above and more. Well done. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful imagery Coco! What a visual this brings to mind, and this magical picture compliments your thoughts beautifully. Lovely flow and description in this poem, loved it!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it Coco and the pic..thank you for posting hon..HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Breathtakingly beautiful, Coco! Very lovely! Denise |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
The beauty of your words and pictures bring sighs to my lips as I lose myself in the weavings of your words. Much love to you from me. I love your work. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
...kindred spirts freely soar As new beginnings in life magnificently unfold... ================== She's baaaaaaaaaaaaack Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Elizabeth ~ thank you for your kindness in reply Sunshine ~ you're too sweet ya know that huh Seymour ~ you make me blush thank you for your reply Kit ~ my dear, your comments are greatly appreciated as I admire your poetry so much Victoria ~ hi you, i'm glad you liked it and my hugs2U for taking a peak Denise ~ my oh my you leave me with smiles your compliments I treasure dear LadyPoet Startime ~ I am touched by your response and I thank you for reading and I'm delighted it brought you enjoyment Interloper~ you're too cute you have a knack of replying with such wit and/or inspiration and once again thank you for taking the time to readNreply |
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