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Mattster Junior Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 29 |
Silence A sigh contains all beauty. And picture what is left of me When tears And sighs give birth to sea. Ah, to know and love her scent. And even though the tide is low I see the beauty of her flow And hope One day to comprehend. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Thrilled to see you here! Just beautiful....Leaves one with a soft sigh.... Welcome to the forum! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ah, to know and love her scent. And even though the tide is low I see the beauty of her flow And hope One day to comprehend ============ this is beautiful...written like a whispered promise... very well written and expressed. Welcome to Passions, its nice to meet you... I look forward to reading more of your words take care jm "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" Lao Tze Tao ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
I agree,this is wonderfully written,with great sensitivity and passion.Fine work. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Well done and welcome to where poets converse. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Mattster, Beautifully written. I think a little mystery is good . . . keeps you guessing!! Good writing.  Welcome to the Passions family!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mattster- Welcome to Passions! I hope you enjoy your time here in our 'family of friends'. I look forward to reading lots more from you. *check your e-mail* -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
What a wonderful way to make your debut in Passions. Looking forward to seeing more written by you.  With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Welcome to Passions Mattser! A beautiful poem and I must echo Janet Marie "written like a whispered promise... " Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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