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The Play |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
When I fear there's nothing left in here (points to her head) I circle the room I roam I become a pacing lion in a cage (points toward direction of the zoo) I swipe my hand upward (sweeps up those long bangs) I get in tune with the habbit When I fear there's gotta be nothing to give I smile and show my long, Sharp teeth in the mirror (runs her tongue over them) I sit back down There's something flickering in here (points to her heart) (begins to write) Gather ye rosebuds while ye may, Old time is still a-flying, And this same flower that smiles today To-morrow will be dying. -Robert Herrick |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Joy14, What an interesting concept, poetry though charades. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Unusual idea and highly effective.Hats off to originality.Top stuff. |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Unusual idea and highly effective.Hats off to originality.Top stuff. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
what if the lion escapes and starts to bite?LOL  thanx for putting a smile on my face though  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
JOY 14- oh YES!! I LOVE THIS!!!! This is so creatively done...I can see the play in my mind...EXCELLENT! -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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