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Oh muse of mine.....
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Oh muse of mine..... |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Oh muse of mine, where did you go It’s for you I search but cannot find Trapped here in the blinding snow It’s so cold here within my mind. Your warming flame has been blown out By the chilling winds of cruel fate Leaving darkness, worry, doubt Times like these make hope dissipate I know that you are out some where there Just waiting for me to come along And with tender loving care Inspire in me a joyful song KM Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Der, I'm there with you... damn muse. I couldn't squeeze a rhyme out of this rock if my life depended on it.  Parker |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I would warm you mind by saying you are about to be inspired to joyful singing Just read some of your fellow poets work which, like yours, is very good and oh, so inspiring. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
keith~ excellent poem though a bit sad. but that is okay...and don't worry m'friend...that muse of yours will return. your heart just needs some time to heal and mend. don't forget my offer still stands on the table, if ever you need a friend my "door" is always open... take care. ~amy~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A very soulful write Keith ... just lovely. With these tender words, I do believe your muse has discovered "you" again. Wishing you many joyful and inspiring songs to come ... take care ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
DK, isn't it just dreadful when our muses play hide and seek? Don't you wish they'd come in, take a little peek? A Haiku or Senryu, something just for fun...but no, they hide and hide, leaving us undone... but for you I shall not fear...look just behind this golden tear...feel the love there just inside...where nothing from you really hides... and soon you will begin to flow... when your Muse decides it's "green light...GO!" Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i understand the worry when your muse is gone..was trapped in a serious writer's block several weeks back and i was wondering if i would be inspired to write again...to never write again, now that is an intimidating thought! well, as some wonderful people at passions have advised, be patient, do something to occupy your mind and it will return... have faith |
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