Open Poetry #11 |
Midnight |
dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
per kaile's request, I am posting more poetry. Midnight -I- Time passes slowly, revealing secrets Buried in the mists of morning and In the deep cloak of night. Purple magic glitters beyond the sleeping mind And the raven’s call will echoe but not For mourning, but for consolation to The spirits that roam within the shadows. -II- The Midnight Wizard sits upon a throne Made of innocence and glass as It sparkles beneath the stars, I sit At his feet, wishing. He takes my hand and holds it warm His flesh the memory of a hundred years His mind is the road of now and forever When everything meshes into one. -III- Times passes slowly, allowing me to learn Giving me the chance to be In this existence of space and knowledge The Midnight Wizard gives me birth. He gives me life, as no life can be known Unless the mind is free and willing And the stars shine brilliantly Upon his magic throne. Joann Renee’ Muszynski 12/05/00 With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe [This message has been edited by dragonpoe (edited 12-04-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
My kind of poem ha..nicely done..loved it ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
glad to know you are posting more poetry well, i read this one twice and i still think i didnt appreciate the full sentiments of this piece...but i marvel at your imagination and i suspect my mind will remind me of the Midnight Wizard from now on... a sequel perhaps? |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
a sequel... Now there is a thought I will have to ponder.. Leave it to you kaile, to get my mind going With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
yes, yes, the Midnight Wizard can be the mentor and "i" can be the lost, apprehensive fellow who have so many questions about life but have no one else to turn to..so at midnight, he wakes up from bed and asks for guidance from the midnight wizard... thats what came to my mind as i read...if you do decide to take this up, drop me a line okay? regards |
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