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For Loves' Sake
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For Loves' Sake |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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For Loves' Sake The world spins in the star spangled night The stars shimmer and grace us with their light While the moon dressed in her silver gown glows Giving us her extra special nightime show Breathing the scents of the evening air Apart in bodies but our spirits are there For loves' sake we will take to the sky For loves sake we will learn to fly The sea is mighty and the oceans are so deep The wind carries my soul to you for you to keep The waves may crash and the storms may rage The others here are just actors on a stage The stars that shine above my head Also sparkle in the night over your bed For loves' sake we touch the night For loves' sake we breathe the light The sky is vast so high and somethimes blue The clouds drift slowly by taking my love to you Each breath of breeze bears to you my kiss While the soft warmth tells of what I miss The smile of the sun is in my eyes And you can hear my hopeful sighs For loves' sake we meet and meld together For loves' sake we will love forever Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"For loves' sake we meet and meld together For loves' sake we will love forever" Marsha, this is a beautiful love poem. You paint some beautiful images with your words. Keep up the great work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Each breath of breeze bears to you my kiss While the soft warmth tells of what I miss such wonderful words...  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marsha, Beautiful love poem and wonderful words, well done. "The smile of the sun is in my eyes And you can hear my hopeful sighs" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
AW Marsha you sure can write a sweet little love story in the form of a poem..I really liked this "For love's sake we meet and meld together, for love's sake we will love forever." Beautiful, Wonderful, Fabulous, Marvelous, Excellent, Superb, Breathtaking, Inspiring, Stupendous and a few more .....................................................................................................................................................no I'm not giving them back.. no! no! no!...I can't live without them!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
LoveBug, thank you I'm glad that you like it, I'm actually surprised it came out as well as it did. Normally I write my poems out or I type them onto the word programm. Not this one, I typed it straight onto the screen, I didn't even have a title. Which is why I'm pleasantly surprised that this is even readable. Thank you anyway  Wynter, I'm very pleased you like it, as I was saying wherever this came from, the magic poet fairy I think, deserves the praise not me. Thank you and if i see her I'll thank her. Daniel J D, thank you muchly. It is appreciated particually when I know that since I made no effort I don't deserve praise. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.  Ethome, thank you very much. Ahhh! But I don't need them now, I've been down to the childrens ward and gathered a load of the lazy little imps. Well they were just lying around down there, and I've set up a counterfieting ring. I've got them turning out superlatives by the bucket load. So psst I can do you a very nice line in utterly terrifics or for a man of taste and discernment there's some divines going begging.  Oh and how did you do that to the screen, that looks like a useful trick. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautiful, tender and delicate. I loved! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dreamkeeper, I'm really pleased you like it, I think it has a certain something. (I'm not sure what ) Thank you I do appreciate every reply I get.Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This......flies.....! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, it does? I'm glad you like it love, so the magic poem fairy has worked good, it's time she earned her keep! (Kari you know what it's like, when she's not asking for the latest go faster stripes on her wings she wants a new wand.)Take care love Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Simply beautiful... *smiles* -Tier |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tier, thank you, a thousand thank yous Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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