Open Poetry #11 |
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My Watch Says "Now |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Now was right then When it was And here it comes again Right then |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Makes it tough to ever get to tomorrow, doesn't it? *S* I like this, sweets! If you're skedaddling off to church, I guess I'll have to wait for an answer on whether you'd like satsumas with your turkey... *S* (But you'll just think light moves quickly if you say okeydokey. *G*) [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 11-19-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Now it says, and then the moments gone. Toe, set it back a few hours so you can come and play! ![]() <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
couldna been then cause it's now... no.. now.. no... now.. no.. now.. no ... now jeezh ![]() |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
In a way it kind of bothers me that I understood this so well...oh well a poet's thoughts...I think??? take care...ethome |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
No better time than the present, is there? Corinne |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow - that was deeply profound... or profoundly deep... or something, I think... ![]() Good to see ya around, Toe... Michael |
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Mattster Junior Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 29 |
Interesting piece. It is - different. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Does Mickey still wear gloves? ![]() |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Toe... Now I was born in the late forties and lived through the sixties, now it's two thousand... Are you lost again..? lucky, you sure are bubba... I could say alot about this.... LOL. I'm not sure but I think I like you. Was that your real toe..? Keep 'em coming buddy.............end Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Where did you buy your watch? Mine doesn't talk and I'd like to ask Santa if he could get me one like yours. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Geez Toe, your watch sounds like my time zone which is always before, it ever was. *Laffs* Be well I aint gonna say write on, cause I didn't understand this one, or I did understand it and that worries me. Keth Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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