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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Karma on my mind simply put, purely a level of destiny you and me but kaleidoscopic beliefs lend not to ease the thoughts of this lovely chemistry so come on Karma, say it’s so say I’ll know the destiny wrought for me come on Karma ~ kaleidoscope in ~ let me see if I’m going to like where I’m going to be let me see past the mirrors of color of green and blue and purple light into the yellow of the night into the reds of the soul and that white that surrounds us all Karma, contrail into my mind and unwind the mysteries and see past all histories and on into the vagaries for I would have some eccentricity and mix it with electricity but never any duplicity for that is not my style let me lean a little into the night, make it all right with sincerity and Karma, while you are about all of this, my friend take a moment to never let certain nights end at least not in the corners of my mind where Karma happens all the time. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
At least Karma wants us to be happy. Great poem. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Karma, contrail into my mind ========================= Beautiful imagery! You have, of course, done it again  Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Pearls_Of_Wisdom Member
since 2000-09-02
Posts 175 |
Hi Sunshine! Remember me, Pearls of Wisdom? Great poem. The rhyme scheme was unique and interesting. I think it gave a circular feel - very appropriate because karma is usually pictured as a circle, as in "What goes around comes around." Neat choice of words, too! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is brilliant it really is magnificent, marvellous and magical. Do I love this, is this Passions, yes! Then I most certainly do. Love it loads Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Kismet- Karma - Fate - Call it what you will. I've felt it. I think most of us have shared this feeling. I truly loved the way you expressed this |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"come on karma..." I LOVE it! That;s great...cheering on a feeling like a racehorse or a cheerleader fo the home team. It adds such sincerity and feeling to the thoughts....and makes for a dynamic poem! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--I think you have been reading the same book that I have...loved the poem! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kari I love this. But Karma seems to be better to you than to me.. But it will always work out in the end. And dreams are free, I think. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
reminds me of that song, "Georgia on my mind. . . " Karma can be difficult sometimes. . . great poem my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Karilea* Exquisite! I loved the "simple" flow of this, and it's only simple because you make it look that way I know better though!!! Love the way you share your gift of weave so wonderfully with us...thank you~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Passions Voice...I believe my Karma likes happy, yes... Interloper...you noticed the line...literally!...thank you!... POW of course I remember you, and glad to see you back! Now stay awhile!...and I liked the fact that you saw the circle, too... MM, many mystical munificent memories you make... Mr. Yeats...I love that you come in to read...thank you... 'Deer, put two on the nose and send me the winnings... Martie...could be...hard to tell...kismet!... Cat...it will creep in when you are LEAST expecting it...trust me... Sven...how clever of you to put it to song... BDC...and I love your graphics that you are so adept at sharing...thank you little one... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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