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I Am With You
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I Am With You |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I'd like to leave you with a gift, I wish you find it waiting here. I want to mend your heart bereft. Cease your trembling, calm your fear. You should know, you call on me. Always always, I am yours... I'll be your breeze, eternal sea, I'll hold each key, for all locked doors... for every heartbeat evermore, my heart beats thrice, I'll love you more... and everytime you wonder when, I'll keep you close, I'll be your friend... and every time you back away, I'll let you go, and wish you stay... every tear that you might cry, I'll kiss away till eyes run dry... and if God's mercy you might need, then God will find me on my knees... You are the blue that colors sky, wistful in release of sigh, you are the green that paints the leaves, you are the you that sings in me... you are golden in the sun, and silver moon as day is done... twinkling starshine down from sky answer to the question, why? And know you, when this day is through, you're not alone--- I am with you. (*repost from Open #8) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely thoughts...much preferable to being alone...James |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I don't think I read this in #8 so I am very glad to read it now....WOW!!! I love this!  -SEA |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Wonderful. Soft and warm, and lovely. Great read. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Ser- I missed this in 8. So I am glad you reposted this! Splendid write, with a beautiful message. Really enjoyed reading this, one of my favorites of yours. take care. ~amy~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you my friend. . . wonderful. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely sentiments my friend. You write so well. A treat to read. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Always always, I am yours... I'll be your breeze, eternal sea, I'll hold each key, for all locked doors... for every heartbeat evermore, my heart beats thrice, I'll love you more... ==================== every tear that you might cry, I'll kiss away till eyes run dry... and if God's mercy you might need, then God will find me on my knees... You are the blue that colors sky, wistful in release of sigh, you are the green that paints the leaves, you are the you that sings in me... you are golden in the sun, and silver moon as day is done... twinkling starshine down from sky answer to the question, why? And know you, when this day is through, you're not alone--- I am with you. ======================= *SMILING FROM EAR TO EAR* OH MY I LOVE THIS SWEET READ... this is divine rhyme baby... this is sooooo YOU and such a cool poem its complex dance of rhyme... its perfect flow its cascade of devotions emotions ... SEE..way back in 8....you were kicking poetic butt baby...  this one is a gift ... Me thanks ya me twin me loves ya too me I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how beautiful your words flowed. How wonderful and loving this poem is. Thank you so much for the read. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
senster nice yuh ! |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Wow... a most awesome poem! How I long for someone to say such things to me. =) You have quite a talent thanks for sharing. --Dave I wear my heart on my sleeve to show the emotions that I can't express with words. --Dave |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ What precious thoughts ! Thanks for sharing them here, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
NICELY WRITTEN!!!!!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all for the encouraging words. I wrote this awhile back for a friend who felt pretty alone one day--okay--so he's a VERY good friend--but I reposted this in honor of a number of friends who had a blue Monday... so thank you all again. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Ohhhhhhhh this is beautiful S'en!! I have so many holes in my memory I can't remember if I read this in 8 but if I didn't I should be kicked for missing it! This is awesome and shows so much of your tender soul in it...like a hand reaching out in the dark...exquisite weaving my friend...love and hugs to you~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
You are the blue that colors sky, wistful in release of sigh, you are the green that paints the leaves, you are the you that sings in me... you are golden in the sun, and silver moon as day is done... twinkling starshine down from sky answer to the question, why? And know you, when this day is through, you're not alone--- I am with you. Dear Serenity a beautiful piece of work most tenderly penned...well done ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Oh my intensely awesome! Mike |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Gosh Serenity, you really have penned another great one... It amazes me to read the expression from in your heart, mind and soul that is scripted by pen of ink that flows words into a jewel of a rhyme.... coco did i 4get 2 say i like this... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Holly, tracie, mike, and Coco--thank you very much once again, for your kind generosity...and my apologies to others for not reading as much of late--I do hope to catch up later. Thanks again. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Wonderful words...Beautifully written..I liked... ~LL~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Don't remember this one but I love this. Very expressive and nice flow. Rich |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is so beautiful, such a perfect expression of eternal love. Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
LL...thank you so much, and I do hope to be around more to check out your work... rich...I am VERY PLEASED that you "love" this one, and thank you not only for reply but for being there during some rough times. sandra...thanks so much lovie, and whenever you're feeling down, you too, should know, you call on me. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
No one should ever feel alone, this is a poem one could carry around and remind us that everyone needs someone. Thank you for sharing with us. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity- this is really beautiful.. really enjoyed it.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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