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Ride On The Back Of A Unicorn
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Ride On The Back Of A Unicorn |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Ride On The Back Of A Unicorn Ride on the back of a unicorn, scatter dreams in the air Let love flow like a golden river with joy enough to spare Hear the angels sing and dance with such delightful glee Lay your heart next to mine and let our spirits run free It takes one glance from you and my blood starts to heat up Just a simple touch has me drinking from passions cup My world is coloured with the rainbows' beautiful hues Your eyes ask for promises that my heart can't refuse Grab hold of the rainbow, reach for the stars that shine Let love surge like an ocean from within this heart of mine Feel the flames of passion burning fiercely and so hot What do you do that ties my stomach into such a knot My breath becomes shallow and I'm blushing as I stammer Whenever you are near me my heart pounds like a jackhammer My thoughts make me blush to the very roots of my hair Because just looking at you recalls the love we share I'm flying into the stars, and playing ball with the moon Let love live for she will be coming to see you very soon Can't you hear her feet walking down your hearts street I welcome you into loves sumptuous luxury hotel suite There's everything you need to make your stay such a treat Such a perfect setting for our hearts and souls to meet Touching you, feeling you fills me with loves' sheer delight Oh beloved love is that which clears our clouded sight Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-07-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ Sweet Mushy Marsha  This is gorgeous!!!!! I'm putting this in my library.....  Truly beautiful -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Don't you get tired of writing all this good verse? No? Good! 'Cuz I don't get tired of reading it Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, thank you so much love, and you're keeping it, I am honoured, I truly am. Thank you most kindly. Take care Mushy  Interloper, is it? I'll take your word for it, because I have no judgement at all where my scribbles are concerned. The only ones I ever like get no response at all. So Thank you loads Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ You are spilling the nicest thoughts across the pages - 'Your eyes ask for promises that my heart can't refuse' I like that ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Mushy Marsha its great to read your wonderful words of love.....you are soaring high my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma ~Theresia~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, thank you truly, you know I'm always thankful to see your name on one of my posts, because I admire you soooooooo much. (I know, you know I do) Charisma, thank you, I am indeed, Thank you kindly. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very sweet and beautiful, Marsha! The title drew me right away, for I love unicorns. Well written! *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Marsha* This is beautiful and dreamy...loved falling into this one. Excellent weave of your pen~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marsha--this is so perfectly, romantically mushy...pardon me while I sigh.... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
When you geet finished with him can I have my unicorn back? I wanna go on a ride like this.....SIGH |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Alwye, thank you most truly, I do really cherish each and every reply.  BDC, thank you very very much, that does mean a lot to me. Martie, thank you, it's true I can't stay away from my mushy writes. I do try, but they seem to come out anyway. Paula love, of course you can sweet, he's a wonderful ride, he really is. Maybe we could share him, I'm very partial to stallions of his calibre. Breeding in every single inch. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Who was it that said that unicorns were all fantasy? I think that they would correct themselves after reading this one. Wonderful and uplifting verse from you my friend. Hugs to you. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, thank you truly, I'm a sucker for rainbows, stars and unicorns, I just can't resist them at all. Ever since I was little and read The Lion, The Witch And The Wardrobe, followed by the rest in the series. Thanks for the hugs love, after the last week I've had I could certainly do with them. In fact given the chance I'd erase the whole week. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
MArsha, this is great! I love uplifting poetry like this with such promise and optimism! Wonderful writing!!! back of a unicorn...sound like fun. Forget riding on the head...that darned horn could do some serious damage!  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
'Deer, thank you very muchly, I'm really pleased you like this. I do too, it's one of my favourites. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
MM~ True to name sweet Mushy Marsha...this is very beautiful Marsha..well penned Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracie, thank you very muchly, you know I really appreciate it. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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