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I welcome.......thee........softly........................
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I welcome.......thee........softly........................ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I welcome thee softly come pleasant come in haste arrive tonight quarter of eight and I will welcome thee into my humble home my abode where I abide astride a dreamer’s ride and where heaven is waiting for thee O come come soon ‘neath light of moon under winter’s sky so I won’t cry but rather in the firelight in the hue of gold chase the cold and play some bold come to me seek my soul safely shoal all my fears dry my tears with silk so sheer it takes your breath away see me now as I welcome you for I have sought you until you were found right….here…. if I were to ask no unpleasant task but with emerald eyes silently cry your name would you hear me and feel the desire the growing fire on pillows pyre and never tire of the welcome that I give thee would thee come feel safe deem content soon after caress spent and in the solitude of two become one would you know the welcome of you in my heart would you welcome the know of you in my heart as I have welcomed thee within? Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kari, With open arms and heart shown to the world Karilea rides with flag unfurled Bringing hope to all mankind giving love, right here we find shows us warm... welcomes in In Karilea there is no sin A loving heart a loving mind All this in karilea we find. 'S wonderful. Sunshine what a brilliant job, my favourite verse is and I will welcome thee into my humble home my abode where I abide astride a dreamer’s ride and where heaven is waiting for thee Write onKethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Why Kethry, I do believe you've become verbose...and this pleases me immensely...just look what you did! Wow! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Karilea what did you say your address was? I don't believe I caught it the first time... Seriously!!! I think it's a winner..great open expressions inducing sensations of warmth and feeling.... Oh yeah the address....geez I just got to see if it's really going to be like you say I just can't help myself...he he |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Well the welcome mat is out and quite a mat it is. A heart full of promises and a soul full of care. I welcome you to Shangri-La. *L* |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Karilea I pray my dear your water supply - does not run dry for I greatly fear if you came near I'd need showers within your bowers frequent and often each time I softened (I could probably come up with more couplets but you get the general idea) - whew - talk about sensuous invitations - wow - and double wow! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome, I live at 555 Memory Lane, Welcometown, USA... Sy, a place I've always wanted to visit, thank you kind Sir for inviting me... Mr. Yeats...what a smile you proclaim... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is amazing my friend. . . just wonderful. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Karilea, any man who would say no to this would be certifiably insane!!! I have little doubt that when he showed up he would indeed find Heaven waiting.... You are GOOD!!!!!!!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Sven... 'Deer...I know some certifiables...bring the jackets...LOL...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is outstanding, it really is. They're all be flocking to your door love, you'll have to beat them off with a stick.  I really love this one too. (Hey Kari, I can do C A, it's just it's called accentuating the positive. Besides there's nothing to criticise ever love )Take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, I for one have never doubted your many abilities...NEVER...and there is no need for a stick, just a sleeping draught to allow the imagination a rest... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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