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Open Poetry #11

Winters' Beauty Haiku

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-12-06 03:31 PM

Icy hand beckons

"Enjoy winters' pure beauty"

Crystal trap is set!

12-6-2000

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-12-06 03:38 PM

Cold and wicked.........very good

-SEA

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2000-12-06 08:20 PM

Dennis-
   wow...giving me chills with this one..
   wonderful, as usual..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-12-06 08:58 PM

Yes, it is and soon it will be falling...

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2000-12-07 01:25 PM

OUCH!i hope the snow isnt too distressing for you, dennis...well, make the best use out of it...will it comfort you if i say that i will gladly trade places with you now?

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2000-12-07 01:47 PM

Beautiful imagery ... WELL DONE!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

6 posted 2000-12-07 04:22 PM

Nice haiku. Cool way of showing that things are not always the way they seem!

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