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The Warmth of the Night
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The Warmth of the Night |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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the warmth of the night consumes me with tender thoughts of you your whispers in the moonlight within the shadows..ebony blue the stars creep lazily across the sky in the heavens where you were born thoughts of you reflect in my eyes our love i shall never mourn fragrant blossoms..sweet gardenia intoxicates spirits of the night kisses softly alabaster skin the breath of blossoms creamy white the warmth of the night consumes me in my garden of hopeful dreams planting deeply seeds of memories nourished by blossoms of moonbeams < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this is truly you...Victoria..I love when you write like this..*s huggzz ~~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
gentle and sweet.........loved this  -SEA |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very soft and warm, flows nicely. Enjoyed it. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
the warmth of the night consumes me with tender thoughts of you your whispers in the moonlight within the shadows..ebony blue ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ love these lines....beautiful and soft with a tender touch of love.... love it ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Wynter..yes i agree with you ha..i have been writing in free verse lately..i dont like to get in a rut ..I like to try different forms..glad you love it Miriah haa..  Sea..thank you and for peeking in Dragonpoe..thank you so much for taking time to read today.. Charisma..thank you ..i am pleased you enjoyed HUGS. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This filled my senses with a sweet aroma... What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Simply lovely Victoria ~ "nourished by blossoms of moonbeams" oh, how I love your words. Bonnie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"fragrant blossoms, sweet gardenia intoxicates spirits of the night." You really write em good Victoria...James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful fragrances come to mind. Nice job. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
kathleen..i love gardenia..not really perfume but i had a gardenia bush outside my bedroom window in hawaii..and the flowers only last about a month..not long enough...thank you for reading hon Bonnie..thank you so much..you are too kind..Hugs James..always nice to hear from you.. so pleased that you enjoyed.. LW..yes gardenia is a wonderful fragrance. thank you for peeking in ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Tender and sweet, Victoria! Corinne |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you very much Corinne..nice to hear from you ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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