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Quiet Reflections |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
In quiet reflection I sit As the memories call softly Echoes from the past Of happier days I knew Gone from me now And with them, you But not completely You left a residue My heart aches for the past To have again, what cannot be But looks as well to the future With a glimmer of hope and eagerness My thoughts are so jumbled That up and down are one Forward and back the same This world makes no sense Someday it will be right again And my heart won’t hurt so much I hold no regrets For the time we did have The road ahead is an unmarked trail I wish you luck as you travel on it Mine leads a separate way now But part of me still goes with you Fare thee well K.M. Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Der Keit~ "Someday it will be right again And my heart won’t hurt so much I hold no regrets For the time we did have" Ahhhhhhh perfectly said.....wonderful heart-felt poem.  -SEA |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Thank you SEA KM Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 This was fantastic...and something I think that many can relate to very well...it's a difficult subject to weave so very well...you did a great job~ < !signature--> The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 12-05-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DerKeit~ Oh my ... this is a lovely piece. Though the paths may take you each in a different direction - remember the good times always. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Keith~ this is so sad yet written very beautifully my friend. i remember when we (me and you) first started posting to one another's work...we realized we shared something in common...being in relationships where we loved the other person very much but was not the easiest. i am terribly sorry to see yours has parted  here's hopingyou find all that you deserve. take care. ~amy~ p.s. mine is still going strong, and i pray it always does |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Thank you all for your kind words. Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
This is very touching and wonderfully written emotions in the raw. I relate so much and wish you the best before you. Beautiful work of art. Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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