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Immortal regretter .
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Immortal regretter . |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Immortal regretter . Dark angel, Fly far away, Your not welcome, In my life today . The bringer of death, The taker of life, The unholy one, Who delivers the knife . I bow to you, Cause your job is hard, The Immortal regretter, Anarchy’s guard . Without you, Chaos would strike, You control all, But please not my life . Written by Tom Baker .© Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written Tom..looking forward to reading more from you..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That makes two of us Tom I don't want to see him/her today either I just want to read these poems everyone writes...and I really enjoyed this one it's very well done!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Tom~ this was a very powerful read. i hope "he" doesn't grace your pressence or mine either today. enjoying life too much here lately have never read your work beforethis one, but i certainly plan to be on the look out for more. take care. ~amy~ |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thankyou very much one and all . Glad your all enjoying yourselfs . In this poem I am trying to talk about not only death itself, but the concept of fate in general, as it has some what taken over reacently . Thanks for your interest . It means a lot . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Absolutely excellant work really first class. I do like this one, it is so well presented and written beautifully. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Very nice! I like the flow alot. Distinctly different. Very, very nice! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
an interesting read on an unique topic...hmmm.."angel of death"...really gives me something to think about...  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Very well put. An angel none of us want to meet but all of us must someday. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thankyou everyone . Your replies are much appreciated . Angels can't be good all the time - remember . Stay lucky, hope your pens flow with the holy ink . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
Wow, why didn't you show this to me earlier? It's fantastic, you're getting better all the time. lol The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
I suppose Death may feel deep sorrow for what he is sentenced to do,as a peon of the spiritual plane. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thanks Debs and EagleScorpion, Your replies are much appreciated, I think death has to feel pain in it's life as it is the pain that you feel that defines your life and not your happiness . We all regret, but I think it has more to feel guilt and regret over than most ! L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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