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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-12-05 04:20 PM



When You I am There   For Passions Men

When you are happy I am glad
When your heart breaks I am sad
When you walk through the land
I'm holding your hand
When you bathe in the sea
You frolic there with me

When to the stars you fly
I am there very close by
When you soar on wings of fire
I am there soaring ever higher
When you cry softly in the night
I'm there holding up the light

When you paint the scene
I'm there where you've been
When your heart weeps tears
I am there soothing your fears
When you see beauty so true
I am there seeing it with you

When your life is drear and slow
I am there watching your river flow
When you are there having fun
I am there enjoying your sun
When you hear the breeze sigh
I am in the breeze I am that sigh

When you write of all these things
My heart is there and it sings
I thank you for this precious gift
For in your words my soul you lift
Touch me with your magic sight
Thank you for sharing your light


Marsha




Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-12-05 04:26 PM


Mushy~ I particularly like this line  ..........

"When you bathe in the sea
You frolic there with me"

Wonderful tribute to all our beautiful men here at Passions   -SEA

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2 posted 2000-12-05 04:28 PM


Wow. You are in many places all at once  



Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Marsha
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3 posted 2000-12-05 06:03 PM


Circe, you are ever sweet and ever loyal love. And I thank you I truly do. (And I hope the storm at home has passed, and I hope the making up was delightful ) Look after yourself love.
Take care
             Mushy
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Marsha
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4 posted 2000-12-05 06:08 PM


Interloper, I'm sorry, I forgot what I was doing tonight, it has been a very very long shift. Seems like there's an awful lot of people getting into trouble tonight.
Anyway thank you very kindly,
Take care
              Marsha
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

ethome
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5 posted 2000-12-05 06:11 PM


A lot of this could be a song Marsha...very good!!  I enjoyed very much.
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6 posted 2000-12-05 06:17 PM


Marsha,
Lovely write.  I like this muchly.

Poeminister

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O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
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7 posted 2000-12-05 06:33 PM


wonderful Marsha. . .

flows like water. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Marsha
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8 posted 2000-12-05 07:24 PM


Prinny True, it could be? Well if you write the music, we could be a double act, (I'd be the comic one) Thanks kid, I told you I couldn't tell if it was good bad or indifferent. So I'll take it on trust, the only ones I always like are my knight tales, but that's because I like to giggle a lot.  
Thank you very muchly love  
                  
Poeminister, thank you I'm pleased it pleased you.       
                  
Sven, thank you. I truly do.      
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


Wilfred Yeats
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9 posted 2000-12-05 08:14 PM


It is why we read here - it is why we're poets - beautifully said Marsha!
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10 posted 2000-12-05 08:47 PM


*sigh* you write with such beauty. I love to read everything you write and this one is my favorite of all. *sigh* thank you so very much. Much love from me to you.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


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11 posted 2000-12-06 08:32 AM


Wilfred, thank you most sincerly, I'm glad you enjoyed it, I truly am.  
                      
Startime, thank you very much love, I do appreciate you always kind words.
Take care
                 Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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Marsha
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13 posted 2000-12-12 04:50 PM


Thank you
                         


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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