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Passions Gallery--nakdthoughts (Wynter's haiku) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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crisp and clear of cold gentle of snow-covered night words of Wynter's Blyss words of Wynter's Blyss wind of Arctic starry night blowing soft of chill --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, You have captured Wynter perfectly in these haiku. Well done. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Wynter is always naked except when covered by snow..nice sven ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!with so few words you said so much. I am very impressed. Much love to you from me. This was great. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your matching of person to persona, form to forma, each piece you grace with invisible lace... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Well done Sven. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A real nice one here Sven... I must ditto what our Sunshine friend says as she expressed it to the 'T' when it comes to you and this gallery, my oh my, what a treasure of poetic gift you possess...  coco |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
crisp and clear of cold gentle of snow-covered night words of Wynter's Blyss words of Wynter's Blyss wind of Arctic starry night blowing soft of chill blowing soft of chill blanketed by passion's warmth to stave away cold to stave away cold one glance upon heaven's blue screened, in gentle glow thank you Sven, a nice surprise to awaken to. My warmest of thoughts sent your way... {{huggzz}} ~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
LW, thanks. . .glad that you enjoyed. . . Victoria, indeed my friend. . . thank you. . . Startime, thank you as always. . . Sunshine, thank you. . . each is special in its own way. . . Sy, thank you my friend. . . Coco, thank you. . . I have tried to make each one fit the poet, it's good to hear that I'm succeeding. . . Wynter, thank you my friend. . . your words have blown into our home not as a chill, but as a wind of the heart. . . thank you for sharing your words with us. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lovely Sven -SEA |
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