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Carbonated Heights |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Carbonated Heights could have been just any old day one that tinkled in crystalline way when just the very thought of you lifted me up carried me through like the bubbles that lift up in crystal glass or champagne’s cup but you are just my carbonated high thoughts of you I’m bound for sky and like champagne you tickle my fancy tickle my nose while I’m glancing at your eyes at your wit at the very way you choose to sit so no need for a drink no need even to think but just let me look at you and carbonated heights get me through Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ this is adorable!! I liked this best............ "when just the very thought of you lifted me up carried me through like the bubbles that lift up in crystal glass or champagne’s cup"  -SEA |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is so sweet! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hi, welcome to Carbonated Heights. . . we have the finest in beverages. . . oh, sorry. . . just getting ahead of myself. . . Reminds me of how I feel when I drink a can of Vernors. . . you remember Vernors don't you Sunshine?? ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
an effervescent image of that special someone ;o} well done!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA...so glad this gave you a bubbly laugh... thank you Elizabeth... Sven, you bet I do...thanks for reading!... Virginia, quite right...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, This is delightful, I could do with some champagne, and there you go giving me a lift. Wonderful delicious and I love it Take care MM  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You are an unquenchable font ... Who needs spirits when there is a pixie like you around? Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love that title...smile... you're doing it again with such upbuilding verses and lines .. you're just making my day with this bright cheery love poem...once again I say the name Sunshine has been attached to the right person! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely write. Enjoyed this much. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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