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autumn tanka
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autumn tanka |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
This autumn morning the early fog is trailing across the ballfield. It vanishes so quickly! WIll our new love be like that? |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah..new love..we hope it wont fade so fast...  nice litte tanka beki  hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
It's amazing to me how so few words can tug so hard on my heart.....excellent tanka -SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beki--Wonderful Tanka, nicely done... Poeminister |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nicely done Beki...enjoyable image!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Beki, I truly enjoyed this! this was quite wonderful. new love can be both very scaring and exciting. holding a world full of promises and dreams. here's hoping all yours come true. take care. ~amy~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yesssss.......wonderful tanka....oh I like these style more and more. great one Beki. Charisma |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beki, I agree with all that's been said, but especially SEA! Lovely! What is the description of a tanka? I'm totally unfamiliar with it. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hmmm, what a way to ask that question most of us will ask one time or another... i liked the analogy here  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
A nice one |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
A nice one |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Beki, Very well done.... INclan |
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