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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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inspired by James...Annies Dance < !signature-->Suddenly..the music stops your arms.. no longer around me my heart beats constantly to the harmony of our love each step we have taken is another step towards us your lips have awakened the senses of my dreams because the dance is over my hand still entwines yours our fingers interlace our hearts gallop in pace two goblets of Chardonnay near sheets ...satin and lace i can hardly wait to dance again in your embrace ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-07-2000).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a sweet tasting dance..~V...enjoyed it ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
beautiful hun. i am speechless. manytimes have i seen this one th dance floor. great job love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you girlfriend..and thank you so much jesse..for peeking in today..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed it a lot!!!!!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Victoria........ This is so melodic, and I can see a couple slow-dancing in the moonlight......it is so very beautiful, this picture that you have painted for us!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you vandana and sunny..just a romantic at heart i guess haa..appreciate you both visiting today.. HUGS~Victoria A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mmm, this one is so sweet and tasty. Makes you want to dance away into the night. Damn, where is that partner??? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Victoria, This is lovely, especially liked the following; because the dance is over my hand still entwines yours our fingers interlace our hearts gallop in pace two goblets of Chardonnay near sheets ...satin and lace i can hardly wait to dance again in your embrace BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sandra ..im sure you have a partner waiting in the wings ha...hes just shy  Bill..so nice to hear from you stranger..thank you for visiting tonight ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is so nice Victoria...and I can hardly wait to dance in your embrace...you make it so tempting...take care sweet romantic..James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you for inspiring me to write this poem James..but no one is more of a romantic than you are.. ...HUGS~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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