Open Poetry #11 |
. . . Give love freely, ask nothing more . . . |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
‘Tis the season for love of man We must love now not “when we can.” Love is only good anyway After we’ve given it away. Love, hope, and charity you see Governs the lives of you and me. Love is the greatest, yes by far For love’s truth you can never mar. ‘Tis God’s unconditional love Showered on us all from above. He sets the example for all And it’s not hard to do at all. Give love freely, ask nothing more, And you’ll get love back ten times four. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Interloper, I agree completly...nicely put... Poeminister |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~ Beautiful sentiments here........ -SEA |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
so true. well done. Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Do it now do it today It is not love unless you give it away. Thank you for sharing a message we all should practice everyday. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Poeminister~ Thank you. SEA~ Der Keit~ My first time to hear from you. Thanks for the read and the comment. inot2B~ You're welcome ... always Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!Oh yes how perfectly you have put it. This poems carries a message of love deep into my soul. Thank you so very much. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Give love freely, ask nothing more, And you’ll get love back ten times four.' Beautiful message, Interloper! Very well written! Love it!! sp 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
evening again interloper, Well done, and a very well written message. Enjoy your writings. BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Just sitting here with a grin - saying, EXACTLY - EXACTLY - EXACTLY ! I just love the positivity in this one. My kinda thoughts ! EXACTLY ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I enjoyed the simplicity of this, it was honest and refreshing and your rhyme scheme I really liked. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Interlope-Simple words to live by, elegantly done, I liked. Thank you for reminding me. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Startime~ Gee. Perfect I don't know, but thanx for saying so snowpants~ Nice to hear from you again. Thanx for the kind words. Bill~ You and your kind thoughts are always welcome at casa Interloper Marge~ I positively appreciate your words Irish Rose~ I can take being called honest, but simple? Seriously, thank you for the wonderful comment Gemini~ Thank you for such a nice comment. My writing has never before been characterized as "elegant." I shall try to live up to that Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
truth you spread for all in silent passage you call to love, love again Thank you Interloper Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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