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VLenski New Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 1 |
The chance that U’ll read this is nihil, I know, but then again is it smaller than the chance that I would have met a girl like U? I love You still I love You still, I always will. Though fate did part You from my heart, I can’t forget What we once had. Provoking the Gods, Against all odds, But worth the try And sad goodbye. At stars I stare, A chance more fair My sole desire; Soul still on fire. I’d give You this: A final kiss Take care my dear, I’m always near. I love You still, I always will. Happy birthday to my Dream Princess, in a better world the only thing, I would have done today, was spoiling U with all my heart! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Welcome to Passions. A very bitter sweet piece. It's never easly losing someone. You've expressed youself well.  ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Welcome Yes it took me a second more to open this but I'm glad I did. At least in a dream you will always have her. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful words and thoughts of romance and love and desire and yearning that hopefully will soon be fulfilled by someone special...James |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
this is very beautiful! i am sad to hear that you and the person you love are no longer together... take care. ~amy~ |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
beautifull poem. take care KM Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! We hope you enjoy your stay here! Now, be sure to check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Vlenski, Well done and welcome to passions. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome to passions!  i enjoyed the minimalist approach you used and im sorry to hear that you and her are no longer together and i echo james...hopefully someone special will soon come along HUGS |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions, and I hear your yearning, its always sad to lost a love. well done take care Charisma |
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liquidphantasy Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 15california |
The title is perfect. Period! |
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