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May I Please Be Sad?
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May I Please Be Sad? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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May I Please be Sad? Allow me a moment to truly be sad As I sort out the threads of the good and the bad For the fine woven fibers that make up my life Have been twisted and turned into sorrow and strife Please give me some time to decifer God’s plan The blueprint proposed and drawn up for each man Let me search and unscroll His design of my page Then lend me the wisdom and sense of a sage Let tear drops flow free in this hour of grief As I awkwardly grasp to affirm my belief Allow me to walk through the meadow alone For footsteps of pain I must tread on my own Embrace me in silence to hold and condole Not with your arms, but from depths of your soul Your thoughts will be carried to me by the wind And I’ll breath in your love and caress it within Elizabeth Santos |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Let tear drops flow free in this hour of grief As I awkwardly grasp to affirm my belief Allow me to walk through the meadow alone For footsteps of pain I must tread on my own Embrace me in silence to hold and condole Not with your arms, but from depths of your soul Your thoughts will be carried to me by the wind And I’ll breath in your love and caress it within ==================== let my silent awe ... answer your question.. for this exceptional poem has taken my words. "Not with your arms, but from depths of your soul Your thoughts will be carried to me by the wind And I’ll breath in your love and caress it within" ...nothing else needs be said ... jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Embrace me in silence to hold and condole Not with your arms, but from depths of your soul Your thoughts will be carried to me by the wind And I’ll breath in your love and caress it within" Breath-taking Liz ... I will leave you with my embrace of silence my friend, thoughts are with you .................... Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth Beautiful and you have my eternal love. Sy |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Liz, sadness is not something that can be allowed or disallowed...it just is. You certainly have your right to it,,,and I wish you didn't have the reasons... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
you surely may... powerful poem. my thoughts are with you. take care. ~amy~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend~ 'Let tear drops flow free in this hour of grief As I awkwardly grasp to affirm my belief Allow me to walk through the meadow alone For footsteps of pain I must tread on my own' Just hear the flutter of angel wings - and know that prayers are there. I love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
You may be sad if need be, only if I may say that your writing is very beautiful in all ways imaginable.  ((HUGS)) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you for your kind responses to this poem. I would also like to thank everyone for your support and prayers during these difficult months. My husband is very near the end of his battle. We're not sure that he will live through this night. My children are staying all night in his hospital room. You have all been so wonderful through this ordeal. Please know that the entire family appreciates your words, your continued prayers and your blessings. THank you, dear poet friends Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You may have to tread those steps alone, Elizabeth - But we're here to lean upon - whenever you need to be held intact... God Bless |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Liz, you and your family will be in our prayers tonight as will Tony. And be sure you are all held in the loving hand of God. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you Nan and Poet Devine for your words of comfort Liz |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm so sorry, Elizabeth. You are all in my thoughts..... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Im so sorry Liz, I wish I had the words to equal the tears... we love you.  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Liz- 'Embrace me in silence to hold and condole Not with your arms, but from depths of your soul Your thoughts will be carried to me by the wind And I’ll breath in your love and caress it within' my thoughts and prayers are with you and your family in this painful time. God bless you, my friend.. heart hugs, ~vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-26-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--My heart is with you, dear friend...and my loving prayers for you and your family. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Liz my sweet lady, I'm truly sorry, and the tears well up in my eyes. You all shall be in my prayers, and remember God will carry you through this difficult time. We're here m'lady if you need us, I hope you know that. It's ok to be sad, and heart broken. For I am sad and heart broken with you.  God be with you Liz!! ((((HUGS)))) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Elizabeth, please know that my prayers are with you and your family this night. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Elizabeth this is pure heart and soul from you and I want you to know it's so human and so real and touches my heart...I'm not a religious men but I have beliefs and feelings and I agree with the apostle Paul's words in the Bible..."Faith is the ASSURED expectation of things hoped for, the EVIDENT demonstration of reality though not beheld." like the wind exists but we can't see it I think we know that we're connected to a force more powerful than a human could ever imagine. The tender content of your poems and your love for this wonderful gift of consciousness that we enjoy as humans alive tells me a lot about the depth of your heart.....and God bless you through this troublesome time...so glad you can write these things and release them from your mind...and I enjoy your expressions so much!! take care....ethome. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I just want you to know you are in my heart and in my prayers. There are no words to take the pain away...but please know that you arent alone |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
BIG WINGED ~HUGS~ FLOATING YOUR WAY Thinking of you and your family Liz Love ~Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very beautiful...soft hugs for you and your family...take care...James |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh Lizzy Oh Lizzy - I don't know what to say my dear friend and Mom-like person. Thanks to Marge for sending me the link here. I wish I could be there with you to do anything - anything small or large... I love you Liz K |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
(((warm huge hugs))) you are in my thoughts...and I pray for all of you, wishing you and your family love and strength. (((hugs)))) Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Liz, Prayers and HuGS winging toward you. Keth Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Liz, Prayers and HuGS winging toward you. Keth Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Some things are beyond comprehension but still must be accepted... others are beyond endurance and must be endured. From the depths of my soul I send love and sympathy and prayers that you and your family will find the strength you need. Hugs from the heart... Ruth |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We are with you... |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, Liz and family, Dale and I have thought about, and prayed for you and Tony ever since we found out many months ago. We will not stop. I'm so terribly sorry the end seems to be near. I cannot begin to fathom such pain, and to say how sorry I am doesn't even touch the feeling inside. I know that God will hold you in His loving arms, and I'm so glad for the faith in your family. For you have a future and a hope in Heaven, ahead of you. The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Liz may God bless you and Tony, and may He be with you...and I know He is, as are we. Elizabeth |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I hated reading this. Please know you are in my prayers. Be strong, Elizabeth. God bless you. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Oh, and you will be in my thoughts throughout the day... Elizabeth |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Elizabeth... My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family. ((((((((hugs))))))))) Best |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Liz, a very lovely piece to write. My hopes and prayers are with you too. Parker |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
im truly sorry to hear this...i hope everything turns out for the best and that pls know that i will be wishing you well  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes. . . My friends. . . let us continue. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I had to go back a little ways... but I finally found Tony's pic... put it on my desktop... keeps me praying... Whatever God has in mind I pray and know he will get you all through this. Who can know the mind and heart of God..? But one thing I do know is that it says "All things work together for good for those that are in Christ Jesus. Much Much Prayers for Tony and also for you, Love... Dale & Rosemary |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is simply exquisite work Elizabeth, my heart and my prayers go out to you. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
back up where it belongs...with love |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Beautiful,powerful and very moving.Thank you. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
my prayers are sent to you and your family, Liz - (((HUG)))) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I would like to thank each of you for your loving, warm, and true sentiments and prayers. You have no Idea how much your words mean to me and help me through this time I was with Tony most of the day, but he was not with me. He's in a very deep sleep, free of pain and distress. My children continue the vigil by his bedside. With much love and appreciation for your overwhelming response, I once again thank each one of you Liz |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Liz know that even though he don't respond, he hears you! You are in the deepest part of my heart, and prayer. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Liz this is such a beautiful piece, you and your family are in my prayers and my thoughts. Take care I know there are angels around you now. God Bless Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
The heart and soul are tied for eternity, Liz, though we be on different planes of existance. You and yours will always be one with him, and he knows that. God bless and keep you...All our prayers and thoughts are with you. jwesley |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think this shows that when one member of our family is in pain, we all feel it... when one member is sad, we all cry with her... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
My tears, my prayers and my heart are with you all, Elizabeth. I wish I could take this from you. HUGS Denise |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
God Bless you all Dear Lady ~ Sending prayers that He will continue to hold you all in His love. Bonnie |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Elizabeth, Words just aren't enough . . . this was so well expressed I have tears in my eyes. My thoughts and prayers are with you and Tony. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Liz, the only end that comes to the faithful is the end of pain and suffering. You have done so much for me, and I wish that I could do more for you now. All I can offer are my prayers and my love, which you always had. I hope that you feel all of our love now. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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The Poetic Plumber Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 38 |
I am so sorry for what you are going through. I wrote a poem earlier this year for a woman who had cancer. It was called 'Love In Your Call.' It is about accepting God in your heart and praying to him with 'love in your call.' I can so tell you have this. You are a wonderful writer. Roger |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Elizabeth, God is with you, watching over you and he hears your prayers, My prayers are with you and Tony. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Still keeping the vigil... |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Liz... I'm praying for you and your entire family. My thoughts are with you...... Warm hugs ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Liz, Sending love and hugs to you and prayers. Sighing for you! Marcy |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
I wrote this for serenity, but I think you need it now... Ears to listen, Shoulders to lend, Hands to soothe, No words to mend. Everyone is here for you and your family. "Prostrated to your feet and humiliated by my sins, with full trust I come to you, Oh Mary! I beg you to accept the request that my heart comes to present before you, for the last moments of my life. Dear Mother, I wish to ask your protection and maternal love. So at the final moment, you do all that your love suggests in my favor. "To you, Oh Mother of my soul, I consecrate the last two hours of my life. Hurry to my side and receive my last breath. And when death has destroyed the string of my days, present my soul to Jesus, saying: “I love it” "That only word spoken by you, will be enough to insure the blessing of God; and the joy of contempleating you through eternity. "Oh my Mother and Hope in you I trust. And my trust won´t be in vain. "Oh Mary! Pray for your son and guide him to Jesus!" -Written by the late Reverend Brother Ildefonso M. Izaguirre O.P. We are with you. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
still in my thoughts and prayers. wish that I could do more.... (((warm huge hug))) Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Still praying Keth Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I feel with you, my friend, Liz... and may you be showered with blessings of courage and strength eternally... regards, sudhir |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I am so overwhelmed by the outpouring of love and support from my passions family. I cannot begin to express my sentiments at your loving words . It is truly an affirmation of the threads that bind the poet community at passions. I am so privileged to be a part of this family Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Elizabeth - It is we who are privileged to have you among us... Many prayers, my friend.. |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Warm thoughts and prayers to you and your family in these difficult times Liz ... Take care my friend, /Kit |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Sneaking online during school to put this back on the top where it belongs. You still have our prayers, Liz. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
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Sneaking on during school to put this back on the top where it belongs. You still have our prayers, Liz. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Liz-I'm so sorry to hear these words of sadness from you. My heart goes out to you dear lady. Prayers and hugs your way for both you and your husband. May your sadness be eased by prayer and family strength. Your poem touched my heart. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Liz-I'm so sorry for your sadness. I will hold you close in thought and prayer for you and your husband. May you find comfort in prayer and family and know we are here for you. Hugs dear lady. |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Sending thoughts and prayers your way... Mike and Susan |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Elizabeth, my thoughts and prayers are with you and your family during this time of pain. Sending you love and strength God bless you my friend *hugs* Maree [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 11-28-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Continued prayers of comfort and strength are being sent in your name Elizabeth and for your family~ |
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Cperazzi Junior Member
since 1999-12-13
Posts 34Texas |
Just returned from a trip and have joined the others in prayer for you and your family. This thread is a testament to how much you are loved. Cindi |
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soozieque_28 Junior Member
since 2000-11-28
Posts 28Tennessee |
I read this on my first visit to any forum and Ienjoyed it. It was eally moving because I ad a son who died a year and half ago and today would be his 5th birthday. I understand sometimes you just neeed to be sad. My prayers are with you. Take care. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Keeping close, in heart and prayer, our Liz. ((((you)))) Claire |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Elizabeth, Your finest work here, what a beautiful poem. I have it secured in my library. Cheers Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Elizabeth~ I am so sorry for the sorrows you are going through. I will keep you in my prayers. Hugs, Deb |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Liz, I havw read this over and over my heart aches for you. Please know that you are in my thoughts. Take care. |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Elizabeth: I just saw this and can only say I wish I could do more. My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family to give you the strength to pull through this most difficult time of sorrow. Take care and may God be with you and your family. kat |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is so beautifully written elizabeth.. we all need to do a little soul searching from time to time.. we're right here for ya whatever it is thats troubling you, my prayers with you in your searching.. hugs, gale "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you are still in my thoughts and prayers for you and your family, Charisma |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i'm so sorry elizabeth..i just started reading everyone elses responses..and now i know whats troubling you..  but know that we are all keeping you and your family in our thoughts and our prayers..peace..gale |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Liz- Still praying for you and your family. God Bless you and may you find the peace and happiness you deserve. I got an Angel in heaven (my mom)...whenever I need strength from up above, I turn to her. So for you my friend I will do the same. You are very loved here at Passions and I join the others in praying and hoping. Take care. ~amy~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I truely regret taking so long to read this but I am so glad that I did. I am very happy that you will keep the faith. This poem is so thoughtful and well put out. You do well even in timed of crisis. Terrible that inspiration is brought from this well of sadness. You are in our prayers at this house from the wee ones to my wife and I. -Burns Family |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Liz, my heart goes out to you in this dark hour. Hold precious every memory shared. May peace be with you tonight. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lizzie and family~ Please know that my thoughts are again joined here with the others to hold you in this hour of need. And now, dear friend - Tony is returned to The Sender of all life - The Master - The Maker - The Giver - The Taker May you find peace in knowing that Tony is held in His arms this night. We are here, dear friend. We share with you. Blessings to you - and much love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
His suffering has ended and he now is cradled in the loving arms of our Lord and for that I rejoice. I also send you my deepest heartfelt prayers for YOUR peace this night my friend. You will once again join him at his side when it is time and in the mean time, I know that you will honor his memory and love by your ever growing love for God and all that he gives us. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sadness is ok....we feel it too.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
permission to feel oh, no, it's not needed for simply it is when one's life is heeded there's passages we pass pathways trevasse moments that take us oh much too far past endurance we muster for life moves along it may be in inches healed with a song perhaps there are seconds that slow to a crawl and some that seem not to be moving at all then when they're gone we cannot retrieve them and all that we've left is to sit and to grieve them tears are our safety they cleanse and release pain much too heavy to leave us in peace so cry them and weep them daytime and sleep them for surely they be sonnets of love for the one who's now free free from the strain and stress of the sting that into one's life the living can bring Being new to this board, I really don't know in what stage this trevail is now in...but I do know the pain of losing someone deeply loved. My prayers are for you and your entire family for a loss has been felt whether final or not. I hope I've said nothing in ignorance that has added any iota of pain to your days. God bless you all! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lizzy..I think this is the perfect thread in which to say: I admire you so much. You are one of the most giving people I know. The love I feel from you, that you give me, is much like what my Mum/Mom gives me - and that is miraculous - considering I haven't seen your face. You know that if I could...I would be right there with you. We who love you here will give as much as we can in this time of need. K |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Dearest Liz, You never need to ask permission for such as this... I wanted to say that before but got tangeled in the tears... My daughter just came running upstairs to tell us that someone put a request into a radio station... need I say, it was for Tony Santos.... Pretty pretty song too. Thank you whoever you are very lovely... Much Much Love dale |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
Neat poem. Take all the time you want. The virtue's called "patience," it's also a muse. When you know how to use it, you won't ever lose. hey, it does say "crazy"...tom |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Elizabeth May the peace that comes from the rememberance of love given and shared be your strength now and in your journey ahead... You and your family are in my prayers...  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Dear Liz...take all the time in the world you need to be sad and feel free to shed a few tears on these shoulders if need be, but also don't let the happy times you shared drift far from your memory. You and yours are in my thoughts and prayers. ((((HUGS)))) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is very beautiful and sad Liz and yes, you may be sad....I truly wish you the best and thanks for sharing this very emotional piece! Nathan |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Liz, this is an exquisite piece, from deep within and a wonderful answer to all those people who will ask "what can I do?" wanting only to help, this is the best help they can give you, I know...to let you have this time to mourn....I have never heard it said more eloquently then in this poem. My prayers are with you, and please, take all the time you need to walk the path that none of us can truly walk with you, only know that you are not walking it alone, God is with you every step of the way and his arm is there to hold you when you are ready to take it. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Liz...I am so sorry for your loss. My thoughts and prayers are with you. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Dear freinds in poetry, You have given me a gift so precious that it will remain in my heart forever. I have just now been able to read all of your responses to this poem and the poems you have written for me, as the computer I was using distorted the words to the point that it was unreadable. I must say I am truly moved by your remarks and the genuine love and caring that helps me so in this time of grief. I don't know how to thank you all for the support you've given us. Now I want to see some happy poetry when I open the forum. I want to smile again. Liz |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
I dont know what to say liz my heart aches for you Ive never cried from anything Ive read until now just know I share the sentiments of this wonderful group of people |
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