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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Yours thy whisper comes hovering on horsetails of soft swirl o’er me and causes a dancing in my soul as singing joins in this reverie a most numinous embrace within yes thy whisper comes in one voice so sweetly soft heaven knows these, the voices of angels as a lone angel comes, only to me to give up pleasure in a whisper and lifts me up enigmatically murmuring mine and to thee, this, thy whisper I am yours Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
About time too! I've been beggin how long?  Kari - I can definitely appreciate the imagery which has grown in bounds with your poetry lately. Its soft hush whispers gentle songs in my mind. (I didn't read it out loud though, 'cause I'm at work and they think I'm weird enough as is...) Peace m'friend, I dig this much. C [edit: that typo looked really bad!!!] [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 10-10-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful my friend. . . Your writing has taken on a whole new life of its own. . . you know this don't you? Just let it flow. . . and don't stop!!  ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Well I'm no angel but I'd wear your favor any day. Lovely poem. Sy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea, this is superb, a wonderful well written poem. Applause, and more applause. Love it Kari. Marsha  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Christopher, thank you for coming in...again... Sven, yes, I'm seeing a new image, and I like me...thank you... Sy, thank you for favoring this with your presence... Marsha, the applause is sweet, thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now isn't this some big growth spurt you are in? You were amazing before but now you have crossed the lines of outstanding and beyond. WOWEEEEEEE....cowboy likes the wind in which this one blows in on. Isn't it so wonderful how a little whisper carries so much power? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well Mark, I guess I will have to stay in this venue then, if it pleases the likes of even rangy cowboys...thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Karilea- If you can continue to fire my imagination and draw me mothlike to the flaming beauty of your words with the same frequency you have of late - I'll be compelled to come up with new accolades - now you've even taken numinous away ~G~ (truly another fantastic write) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats, shall I send a bucket of water or do you prefer the chemical type of fire-retardant? Thank you for your kind words...I shall try to continue to aspire, for no growth should ever be bricked... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
What else can I say but this is beautiful? I like the "new" you (and the old one!) Dee |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dee, new, old, improved...LOL...I'm a chameleon...thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Sunshine, this poem, like many you write, permits the reader to interpret the piece; I read this as spiritual and it is most uplifting and beautiful! Marcy |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marcy, sorry to be so late in replying...yes, everyone should be able to interpret any poem their own way, and I like the way you've looked with your heart into this one... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I interpret it as great poetry! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well thank you kindly, sweet Kathleen... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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