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Minions from Hell - A paradelle ta-da!
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Minions from Hell - A paradelle ta-da! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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I just had to try this style, it's fun but I don't think it will become my favourite because by brain is screwed around enough. .. and how would I look at myself in the mirror with my head on backwards. Btw Take Marge's advice, Tynelol first... then the paradelle. The minions from hell the minions from hell came here to dwell came here to dwell the minions came here to dwell from hell Came demons and implings came demons and implings those bloody, all pimpling those bloody all pimpling and implings all bloody those demons came pimpling On all hallows night on all hallows night to bring humans fright to bring humans fright night on all humans to bring hallows fright From hell came the minions Here came implings and demons Those pimpling to dwell on hallows night To bloody and bring all humans fright. Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sounds like you'd need a lot of Tylenol! Well done, Kethry. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Kethry, pass that over here will you?? Great job! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Elizabeth and Sven, Tylenol all round  Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I think it's great to try something new in your writing! Go for it I say! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow ... this is quite a style Kethry, and you've done well! Looks like that Tylenol could come in pretty handy ... what a puzzle to pull together, great job! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ My head hurts just looking at it ! Great job, gal. And the nicest thing about trying one - is when they are OVER and the Tylenol takes effect ! I'm proud of you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
YA did it !! and ya did it way cool..and made it look easy very cool title.. these are perfect for Halloween poems. excellent Kethry... and Im glad to know Im not the only one who eats Tylenol like candy LOL great job... take care jm |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kethry- Hooray for you!! You did a great job on this. Doesn't it feel wonderful when it's all done? lol. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Eilidh Junior Member
since 2000-08-27
Posts 30 |
My head hurts from these twisting words :P Very well done |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very effective paradelle! You did it! The Halloween theme is perfect for this form Well done Liz |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*love it*...  but first you must help me out....what the hell is tylenol....my dictionary aint telling me that..... Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry, this is wonderful, truly, I've no idea how they are done. I'm just awestruck that anyone can. So I'm as amazed as if I'd been stuck in the labyrinth along with Theseus. I really love this one, just don't expect me to pick up this challange. I'm a simple soul. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks all. Charisma, I'm not exactly sure what Tynelol is. I'm not exactly sure what Tylenol is. But it sounds as if it would make reading and writing these things easier. But it sounds... aaaaarrrgh. I need to lie down. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Excellent work!!! My eyes are crossed now, other than that, I feel fine...I feel perfectly fine... laughs Advil for me!!!Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
good job, but now i have a headache and need some vice grips to untwist my tongue! Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Kethry, Congrats on a job well done .I know for a fact these are not easy , ( just got one of mine "graded" and I'm not so all-fired smart as I thought I was ). I'll pass on the tylenol though , it might not sit too well on that big piece of " humble pie ". Doc |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Kethry...better you than me girl...this is great... |
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